Kathryn Nickles
Captain Planet
ÒCaptain Planet, heÕs our hero, gonna take pollution down to zero!Ó This was the theme song of one of my favorite television shows as a kid. Captain Planet was a blue-skinned, green haired super hero; and every week, he and a group of teenagers saved the planet from a polluting villain. By the end of the twenty minute show, Captain Planet would somehow stop these bad guys, and the world would breathe clean air once again. Unfortunately, there is no real Captain Planet to come and save Earth from the villains we have become. It seems like everything we do sends us more and more into the terrible, murky abyss that we call home. We have become more aware of these problems over the years, and some colleges have even established a major, environmental engineering, in order to create real day heroes to help rescue Earth. One of these everyday heroes, although not an engineer, is Dr. David Orr, a respected environmental activist. In his essay Reflections on Water and Oil, Orr accuses the people of earth of becoming less intelligent by using oil.
When one is writing a persuasive essay,
one of the most important things needed to be established is their credibility,
or ethos. David
Orr is best known for his efforts on environmental works in higher education and
his recent work in sustainability. He led the effort to design and build the
Environmental Studies Center at Oberlin College, where he teaches. Dr. Orr is
the author of three books: The Nature of Design; Earth in Mind; Ecological
Literacy and co-editor of The Global Predicament. He gives frequent lectures at hundreds of colleges and
universities throughout the U.S.
At Oberlin College, he is the chair of environmental studies and is both
a theorist and teacher informing us to look at building design in drastically
new ways (www.powerofdesign.aiga.org).
As one can see, Dr. Orr is very accomplished and acknowledged by many people
and organizations. However, many
of the statements Dr. Orr makes are unsupported and extravagant.
Reflections
on Water and Oil is an essay written to
persuade people to stop using oil and instead revert back to water as an energy
source. The audience first thinks
that this is a great cause; no human being can say that they want more oil
soiling this world. Except that Orr gives no proposals on how this might be
accomplished. He spotlights the
problems with oil and states that this resource has undermined our
intelligence. When I first read
that statement, I was in shock.
ÔWhat is he talking about,Õ I thought Ôthis guy is crazy!Õ After reading the entire essay, my
thoughts did not change. In his
six reasons that oil has made us dumber, he makes accusations without any facts
or evidence to back it up. He also
offers no ideas on how to change energy sources from oil to water; instead he
just points his finger at the trouble.
To
begin with, he says that oil has Òeroded our ability to think intelligently
about communityÓ. Orr goes
on, saying that oil has turned the world against each other. Nations and countries are all fighting
over this black gold that we hold so dearly. Well I am sorry Dr. Orr, but when the tsunami hit I did not
see disputes about whose oil would be used, or who would have to pay the bill
for the gas used by the relief planes. When there are crises around the world, the first
thoughts of those helping are not, ÒI wonder how much oil this will take.Ó They are thoughts of compassion and
sympathy. Of course there are
disputes about this resource, but there are also disputes about having enough
food, water, and shelter. Should
we then get rid of these so that we can avoid confrontation?
His
second reason is that oil has undermined our land intelligence by increasing
the speed with which we move on it.
David Orr explains that when we travel nowadays, the travel is more
about the destination and not the journey. He also states that ÒWe no longer experience landscape as a
vital reality.Ó I wonder, then
why, so many people insist on buying million dollar properties because of their
landscapes. Also, if our travel
was not at the speed and convenience it was, then how would the public be able
to visit other countries with different and unique sceneries; these countries
are not a jolly train ride away.
Cars and jets would be replaced by arrogance of those not exposed to the
cultures and beauty of other countries.
People would spend all of their vacation time getting to their
destination and not being able to spend anytime there.
In
his third reason, Orr tells the audience that oil makes the world Òmore
complicated but less complex.Ó
With this complicatedness comes experts and specializations of certain
knowledge that get rid of the Renaissance man. He also explains that with complication, responsibility
declines, because if no one saw a problem coming, no one can be blamed. I agree that this world has become very
complicated, but is having experts really that bad? WouldnÕt you want someone who only deals with one specific
aspect, so that they excel at it and have less of a chance of messing up? If a worker needs to know how do
accomplish twenty unrelated tasks, chances are one or more of those tasks will
be abandoned or incorrect. Having
experts also creates more jobs for this unemployment rut the nation is going
through. Instead of having one
person doing many things, have many people each doing one thing. Complicatedness does present more
unforeseen problems, but that certainly does not mean no one takes the
blame. We blame workers everyday
for unforeseen problems: mechanics, stock brokers, hair stylists, computer help
desks, etc. Each of those people,
though the problem may have not been their fault, has to take the blame and try
to not have the problem happen again.
Fourthly,
Orr states that oil is responsible for Òthe urban sprawl that has conditioned
us to think that ugliness and disorder are normal.Ó Urban sprawl is an escape from the polluted and dangerous
cities that demand people to work in them. In a family, the parents always want the best for their
children; if the parents have the chance to live in a house with a back yard
contrasted to staying in the city with a small apartment, I believe the parents
would take that opportunity. How
can one chastise people for wanting to live outside of smog and
contamination? The Declaration of
Independence states that we have the right to life, liberty, and the pursuit of
happiness; many people want to pursue their happiness in a place they feel safe
and healthy.
The
last two reasons of the essay are, oil devalues craftsmanship and handwork and
Òoil requires technologies we are smart enough to build, but not smart enough
to use safely.Ó These are the only
two reasons I agree with Dr. Orr on.
Orr states that masters of a craft have been forced into factories, and
people moved into cities. I also
believe that by making this servicing economy that tailors to the worldÕs
convenience, it drowns out the creative minds of people. People need to be challenged so that
ideas for new technology and politics are born. Orr does an excellent job of using emotion in these last
paragraphs. He plays with the feeling of non-conformity, that our nation is
more than factories full of people with unnoticed talents and abilities. Next, he tells of the horrible oil
spills that have ruined ecosystems.
Oil is extremely dangerous to transport, but Orr again does not give
alternate ideas on how to have a safer way to transfer oil.
Reflections
on Water and Oil was an out of the
ordinary essay to read. It is not
everyday that someone writes about how oil has made us stupider and water will
make us smarter. Even though I did
not agree with most of the statements said in it, Dr. Orr does a wonderful job
of using emotions to get the reader riled up. He presents a romantic idea, to not use oil anymore and
instead use water for energy.
However, he does not give any plans or suggestions on what should be
done to stop the immense oil usage.
This essay could be extremely persuasive if Dr. Orr gave designs for
this revolution, and stop pointing the finger. If he wants to be a real world superhero, he is going to
have to show some real world action.