Responses to Presentations May 1 2012
Group 11
The King Lear project which was most meaningful to me was
Group 11. Their group presentation was a creation of Ôthe oldest newspaperÕ
called The Olden Times highlighting obituaries of the main characters of the
novel. Featuring King Lear, Gloucester, Cordelia, Regan, Goneril, Edmund, and
the Duke of Albany, the group was thorough in explanation of each character
individually. Giving description of each one of the characterÕs personalities
and qualities, as well as a brief explanation of their deaths, this newspaper
gave the reader a great idea of each one of the characterÕs lives. I felt it
was clever how the group created the obituaries to be written by either
themselves, or their murderer or their beloved friend. Depending on which
character had written the obituary, this set the mood and tone of each
individual characterÕs newspaper article. Earl of Kent writing King LearÕs
obituary, gave his article the view from a friend, who looked up to him. Edgar
writing GloucesterÕs obituary, revealed his true sadness of his fatherÕs life.
Earl of Kent writing CordeliaÕs obituary also revealed his true grief for her
innocent life. Edmund, the lover of Regan, wrote her obituary described her as
kind though she was in fact not. Gonreil writing her own obituary revealed her
guilt for her actions. Albany writing EdmundÕs obituary described his noble
character. Lastly, the Duke of Albany honored his lost friends, ending the
newspaper. The newspaper itself was very interesting to read and a great visual
for the class. I enjoyed their creativity of the project and how their power
point was presented in an old fashioned design. The group thoroughly explained
the emotions of the characters about the causes of death of the main characters
that were described in the book, and overall I enjoyed the creativity of the
powerpoint presentation.
The presentation that I enjoyed the most was that titled, The
Olden Times, presented by Group 11. I really enjoyed this presentation because I thought it
gave a very accurate representation of the story and characters presented in King
Lear. I really enjoyed the style of the
presentation in that the group used a powerpoint for the audience to read of
off of as they also read aloud to the class. I like how they did the obituaries
for the characters that had died because they were very interesting and
seemingly accurate. I also found the actual appearance of the powerpoint to be very
helpful towards the project because it made it seem very realistic and just
really captured my attention right off the bat. I like how each group member
focused on different characters and made accurate judgments of what their
obituaries may have been like if written by the real characters. The overall
group presentation was very straight forward and I feel that this added to the
clarity of the presentation. The group spent a significant amount of time
reminiscing upon each character and I think this really helped the audience get
a better understanding of the major features that each character was known for.
It appeared that this group put a lot of time and effort into this presentation
because of how thorough and well put together their presentation came across.
Overall I really enjoyed this presentation and I believe that it ultimately
furthered my understanding of King Lear
altogether.
The presentations from May 1 were all very good, however my
favorite presentation from yesterdayÕs class was the reenactment of one of the
scenes from King Leer. I thought they did a really good job of modernizing and
translating the scene so that the audience was able to understand what was
happening, as opposed to simply memorizing the lines out of the original script
of the play. I had a general understanding of what happened in the scene from
reading the play, however after the presentation, I have a much better notion
of what happened. All of the actors had great charisma and seemed to really
reflect what each character from the book was really like or described to be. I
especially want to make note of the person who played King Leer as I was very
entertained and intrigued by her interpretation of the character. Using a
nerf gun instead of a sword to threaten Kent and others was very funny as well.
The groupÕs use of signs on their chests, which contained the character that
they were playing at the time, was really clever. It was a smart way to
be able to include multiple characters from the scene but at the same time not
confuse the audience as to what was going on. Overall I really
enjoyed watching the entire presentation and found myself laughing and giggling
on multiple occasions throughout the entirety of it, as well being very
interested as what was going on between King Leer, his daughters, Kent and the
husbands. Bravo!
The group presentations for King Lear and Francis Bacon
were some of the best presentations of the quarter. From a modern play on King
Lear, a police interrogation, and the correlation of idols to modern day
society, each group did a fantastic job. However, the presentation that meant
the most to me was Group 11. Death and tragedy is a main theme in ShakespeareÕs
play of King Lear. The group came up with presenting obituaries for each of the
characters that died written by a fellow character from the book. The obituary
of Lear was told by his favorite daughter Cordelia. GloucesterÕs life and death
was presented by Edgar. Cordelia by Kent, Reagan by Edmund, and Edmund by
Albany. GonerilÕs obituary was in fact her apparent suicide note. Each of the
obituaries talk about the characters in-depth with even similar dialect that
each of the speakerÕs characters have using their own personality and their
perspective of the events that occurred during the play. Their lives are
portrayed very accurately and incorporated scenes from the play. I thought the
group did a great job, were creative, and had a very unique concept for their
project. I did think that the obituaries should have included more direct quotes
from the play to use more authenticity about their knowledge of the play. I
loved how each obituary had a picture and an estimated age of the character.
Even the newspaper seemed authentic in terms of the coloring of the paper, the
title ÒThe Olden TimesÓ, and even had newspaper-like font.
The King Lear presentation was very entertaining to listen
to. I really enjoyed how their powerpoint was filled with creative
pictures and did not contain many words. The group was obviously very
knowledgeable about King Lear, and did a great job putting together an
entertaining presentation. With all the deaths that occurred in the
story, it could be confusing as to what was really going on and why but this
group did a good job portraying it to the class in a unique way. I was
easily able to relate King Lear to modern day crime shows with all the
suspicious deaths that took place, just like they do on tv.
I really enjoyed watching the group that presented the
obituaries for the various characters in King Lear. This was a very tragic
story, so I felt that it was fitting to focus on the deaths that seem to be of
the greatest importance in teaching the lesson that Shakespeare likely wanted
to share. While a lot of the information they presented wasn't explicitly stated
in the story, it helped me to get a better grasp on the difficult language in
which King Lear was written. Because each of the obituaries was basically an
explanation of each of these deaths, it helped me to better understand what
went on in the story, and gave a good explanation of the various truths that
should be taken away after reading. It is really easy to get caught up in the
story line of a book and forget to think about the underlying theme that the
author is trying to get across. Because of this, important to remember that
most authors arenÕt simply trying to tell a story, theyÕre trying to teach the
reader a lesson. The group did an excellent job of tying everything together
and it was obvious that they really grasped the information presented in the
book. By doing this, they were able to pass on that knowledge to the audience,
offering us a whole new level of understanding that we previously didnÕt have.
I thought that group number eleven did a great job with
their project. The book of King Lear ended up having almost all of
the characters die, but it all happened so fast towards the end of the story.
This project, The Olden Times, not only helped to describe the personality of
each character through their obituaries, but also showed who they were closest
with through the writers of each, such as that ReganÕs was written by her
secret lover Edmund, CordelliaÕs was written by the earl of Kent, and King LearÕs
by Cordellia. I also thought it was very clever that they made GonerilÕs
a suicide note. In it, she says goodbye to this cruel world and makes it
very clear that this was written right before she went to kill herself.
Although this project did not go over the whole book of King Lear, in fact it
only went over the last few scenes; the reader can easily pick up on the plot
through these obituaries. There was not a whole lot of excess
information, which made each obituary direct and to the point, and the
characterÕs personalities were really revealed through these writings, such as
when Edgar was comparing his life to GloucesterÕs saying that they were similar
because they both had cruel brothers and both had similar personalities, or
such as when Cordellia described her love for her father in the writing, which
is what the whole basis of the book is on. I though group eleven was very
creative and the newspaper was well titled and well put together.
All of the groups today did a great job, but I found group
11Õs presentation to be very insightful to the readings and also a great and
innovative way to present information. The idea of using obituaries to
tell a story is a great idea; this group was able to summarize each characters
individual stories all while telling the overall story. I found it
very helpful and interesting that the group presented the obituaries as not
just reports, but as letters from lovers as well as a suicide note. These
factors alone tell their own story and show more about the plot. As
someone who has an eye for detail design, I also enjoyed the background of the
presentation; I thought it showed that the group truly paid attention to detail
and helped express the fact that this did not happen in present day times.
The group did a great job and showed a true understanding of the text and also
spent a long time preparing for the presentation.
While I really enjoyed all of the presentations from today,
I felt that Group 11 made the project that was most meaningful to me. I
feel that they had a really great and unique idea by writing the obituaries for
all of the characters that died in the madness that was act five of King Lear. By
making each article in ÒThe Olden TimesÓ newspaper, there was an added effect
that the articles seemed actually authentic. I think they did a great job
having each obituary written by a character in the play since it gave a good
idea of both the essence of the character as well as how they were perceived by
the character who ÒwroteÓ the article. For example, Kent wrote LearÕs
obituary and called him a Òfeared warlordÓ, and tried to portray him in the
best light possible. I thought it was particularly funny when Edmund
wrote ReganÕs obituary and he mentioned how she was just like him and had an Òannoying
siblingÓ bringing him down. The group even made sure that there was a
logical reason as to when the obituaries would have been written, such as
clarifying that Edmund wrote the obituary before his battle with Edgar, and
making GonerilÕs obituary a suicide note. While IÕm not sure if it was
intentional or not, each member was also wearing all black, which was very
fitting for the sadness associated with obituaries. I think that group 11
presented the material in a very clear and easy to understand way, while also
staying true to the content of the story.
I enjoyed
group 11Õs presentation the most yesterday. King Lear was a difficult read with
many characters and many complicated relationships. With such, the group gave a
unique insight into the characters. It was clever to make obituaries for all
the characters who had died in the play as well as having these obituaries
written by another character. They accurately portrayed how the character died
and their individual characteristics. The group also was able to depict the
different relationships between the characters of which had died and the
character who had supposedly written the obituary. Kent wrote CordeliaÕs
obituary, which gave a unique perspective to their loving and somewhat familial
relationship. Edmund wrote ReganÕs obituary, which was clever as the two were
supposed to be lovers at the end of the play. I especially enjoyed that GonerilÕs
obituary was actually a suicide note, thus written by her. She was definitely
my least favorite character and the most annoying to me, so I found it humorous
that no other character seemed to want to write about her. Overall, the groupÕs
presentation, although not very engaging, it was interesting and easy to listen
to.
I liked the old look of the document, it gives the project
a nice feel. Writing obituaries is a cleaver approach, because to a non-literature
enthusiastÕs, all I see in a story like this is everyone dies. I felt
like this was a mockery of the fact that a literary work is considered good or
great if everyone dies at the end, which seems ridiculous to me. LearÕs
obituary was cool because it describes his personality while still telling his
story in chronological order. I also liked how GoulesterÕs
obituary was written by Edgar, which is very cleaver, because you get the
perspective of someone at the end of the story with some bias and emotion. I
would have liked to see more than just reading the slides verbatim, but all in
all, this was a very cleaver representation of the tragedy. They were
still able to get the gist of the story from the obituaries with some emotion
and feeling from another character. I liked how EdmundÕs was funny and
they painted him out to be an asshole ladies man, and having Zeus writing
CordeliaÕs obituary was very appropriate.
My favorite presentation was ÒThe Olden TimesÓ
group. I loved the idea of making an olden times newspaper, and I found
it comical that the majority of the pages were all obituaries. This made
me laugh because I thought that that would probably be the whole paper in that
time. I thought the group had a very good grasp on the reading. It
is evident that the group read thoroughly. The quotes given in the paper
matched excellently. Another aspect I enjoyed was the author of each
obituary. It was interesting to see the perspective each author gives
towards the person they are writing about. In their presentation the
power point went well with the speakers. They all complemented each other
very well. If I were going to pick one thing out negatively it would be
to have a little bit more information. There was a bit of a lack of
information in the presentation and PowerPoint. The information given was
not very deep and I felt like the group could have gone into a little bit more
depth. However, this group really did a good job at accomplishing what
they were trying to do. I enjoyed the presentation, and also reading more
thoroughly what was in the obituaries afterwards. I even laughed a couple
times. Good job!
The project that I found most interesting was the
collection of obituaries for the characters that passed away at the end of King
Lear. I have always thought that casting a positive light on the recently
deceased is an interesting thing- often times even for people that are
generally disliked. I felt that in general the obituaries here did shine a more
positive light on the deceased even though they were written in the voice of
the characters- King Lear especially is portrayed in a positive light by his
loyal servant and friend, and the Duke glosses over the long episode of exile
and madness that King Lear endured, instead choosing to mention him in his
prime years and then later as a man enlightened by the truth. This style makes
this the most believable of the obituaries in my eyes. On the other hand, I
felt that the Cordelia obituary was much less reflective of what a character
might actually say about her. Certainly it is difficult to say as much about
her given her only coming into play at the beginning and end of King Lear, but
it still seemed that the Duke of Kent here used too much of the platform to
criticize King Lear and her other sisters(and their failures) rather than
Cordelia herself. It may have been a better choice to write this obituary from
the perspective of the King of France rather than that of the Duke. Overall,
though, I felt that the group did a good job of channeling the authors' voices
of the obituaries.
The olden times newspaper presentation was very clever.
This play has been my favorite literature thus far in the class and I felt like
this group didn't detract from that. They captured both the plot, characters
and the relationships between the characters in a slightly depressing way,
because of the emphasis on obituaries. I was disappointed that the other
sections of a newspaper were not utilized, because it could've given the
reading a lot more depth. On a side note, there was a mistake with on of their
facts. Gloucester did not blind himself. The duke of Cornwall blinded
Gloucester and was aided by his wife Reagan. Disregarding these critics, the
presentation was informative and captivating. Very well done.
The project that was the most meaningful to me was the
project done by group 11. I liked this project because it was simple, and to
the point. I liked that the whole thing was done in obituaries because it
emphasized that so many people in this story died because they were not loyal
to their family. I also liked the fact that through the obituaries the group
was able to summarize the story fairly well. King LearÕs obituary described how
his daughters deceived him. GloucesterÕs obituary noted that he trusted the
wrong son. CordeliaÕs praised her truthfulness. ReganÕs described how powerful
she was as a woman, and described EdmundÕs love for her. I also enjoyed the
addition of GonerilÕs suicide note, and the Duke of AlbanyÕs lesson to rulers
of the future about the importance of respecting family members. I felt this
was meaningful because in my own life experiences I have found it very
important to be loyal to family. I have learned throughout my life that parents
are the people I can always count on to help me. Although this isnÕt the case
in all families I feel that if Goneril, and Regan had respected their father
they would have ended up with much happier lives. The fact that they deceived
their father lead to the suffering of so many people.
In this third round of presentations two presentations
really stood out,the King Lear Crime Investigation and the Obituaries. For the
King Lear Crime Investigation I enjoyed the fact that their slides were not
wordy. Wordy slides distract the audience as they try to read it instead of
being engaged to the presentation. But on the other hand, I enjoyed the
wordiness of The Olden Times because it added to the allusion of the newspaper
background. The background of the paper was definitely one my
favorites so far out of all the presentations because of its authenticity. The
wording and quoting of the text in the obituaries was also very
authentic and blended in nicely with the time period. For the King Lear Crime
Investigation, the quotes on each slide were humorous at times when they
were coupled with the pictures. Overall the pictures did work well though to
keep the audience captivated with the presentation. At the final slide page of
the Olden Times, the quote used from the Duke of Albany was put to good use as
a concluding slide. It tied up all of the descriptions of the charaters
previously mentioned. Overall both of these presentations used contrasting
styles that I enjoyed and kept the audience captived the whole time.
I really enjoyed the olden times newspaper article. It was
interesting how the first one was written in first person while all the rest
were written describing a loved one. The daughters was written very well, but I
didn't really like the intro for his wife. The PowerPoint itself was decorated
very well and had an old-time feel to it making it seem like it was an actual
old magazine. Overall I enjoyed the presentation.Group twoÕs presentation was
definitely my favorite. One reason I steer clear from Shakespeare is because it
can be very difficult to understand. This group took a really fun approach, ÒtranslatingÓ
Act 1, Scene 1 into our modern language. I really loved the way the four
presenters incorporated their own personalities into the script and added a lot
of life to the dialogue. Another way the group made the scene a lot more
entertaining was by adding humor. Though I think Shakespeare was a genius
playwright, a lot of his work can be dull if just read line by line. This
presentation showcased the adaptability of his work; though the delivery might
be altered. The message was still crystal clear, possibly even more easily
grasped, and a lot more relatable. The approach this group took reminds me of
how old texts, like the Bible, have been translated into more contemporary
vernacular so that people of this day and age are able to read and understand
clearly. Another thing I loved was that the group members played two characters
at once. That concept emulated Shakespearian performances back during the days
of the Globe theater. Overall, I was impressed by how thoroughly the group
seemed to understand the happenings of the first act. They then took that
knowledge and shared it with the rest of the class in a way that we all could
easily comprehend. Using terms like Òshut upÓ and props like the Nerf gun gave
a 21st century feel to a 17th century play.
Group 12
As interesting as all the presentations were, I thoroughly
enjoyed group 12s presentation. They performed an entertaining rendition of the
first act of King Lear. I thought they all did an accurate (and at times
emotional) portrayal of the characters in Shakespeare's classic tragedy
(particular the girl that did King Lear's part). Due to Shakespeare's complex
language, they put it in modern english so the entire class could understand.
This enabled them to correctly portray several different characters as well as
all of the important and significant parts in the first act. Not only did they
give us a good understanding of the beginning of King Lear, but they also
turned this tragedy into a comedy of their own which I found very amusing,
especially when they would flip their cards over and play an entirely different
character at the drop of a hat. I also enjoyed the way the three sisters were
portrayed, with Goneril and Regin being stuck-up and mean, while Cordelia was
played rather sweetly and lovingly. I commend Group 12 for their accurate and
amusing performance and presentation.
Group Twelve's
dramatic reenactment of Shakespeare's King Lear
was truly a masterpiece. There was obvious thought and time put
into Group 12's "modern version" of Act 1, Scene 1 of King Lear.
Moreover, I found the group's enthusiasm and overall commitment to
the performance compelling and assisted their intent to make
King Lear more relate-able to those in modern society. Although
the group was somewhat short on members to play all the roles in the original
King Lear I thought that they did an excellent job choosing the primary
characters that contributed the most to the main story line.Also, I found it
noteworthy that the drama enacted by the members of group twelve made
the story of King Lear much more real and even enjoyable for me.
Thank you group twelve for your wonderful performance.
I found group 12 to be the most entertaining, their
presentation of the first act was informative since they translated the text
into modern English which was more understandable and could be related to. It
actually felt like being at the theater, it was so enthralling. I admired their
ability to play more than one role, it added greatly to the entertainment. They
also had their roles and lines very well rehearsed, I do not think that I would
be able to do anything like the amount of lines they memorized. They made the
play flow very well. Overall, it greatly increased my appreciation for
Shakespeare. Normally, when just reading Shakespeare, it doesn't hold the same
captivating appeal, as compared to the spoken word and acting.
The presentations given by the groups yesterday were about
King Lear and all cleverly and effectively went through the story and portrayed
and explained the characters and the plot in a way that the class would
understand. The second of the five groups that presented yesterday presented
the information the best by far. The group acted out the first scene but
altered the language to make the characters more relatable. They portrayed the
characters in a way that each student could relate, making the girls sound like
typical teenage daughters. Their actions were altered as well, using a Nerf gun
as a weapon shown in the scene, a map and a highlighter to represent the father
dividing up the land between the daughters. The language and props provided comical
relief that improved the groups performance and enhanced the presentation.
Also, each person in the group played two characters and flipped their name tag
over to let the audience know which character they were playing, much as people
in ShakespeareÕs time played multiple characters.
The second group(#12) had a very unique idea and it was
very intriguing the entire ten minute presentation. King Lear, as we all have
realized, is a very difficult read and hard to understand some of the
interactions between the characters. Thankfully, this presentation was very
helpful and straightened out a lot of questions. Not only was it very
entertaining and creative, but also very put together. They memorized all their
lines, which also made it more engaging. The style of their act was also
perfect for the time period as well. This is because they had different
characters played by one person, which they did back in the Shakespearean days.
The English version of the original old English I thought was entertaining like
I said earlier, but also pretty accurate. Their emotion and inflection of the
text also was accurate to the original text and made it very believable as
well. One of the things I liked most about it was it made the scene feel like a
normal family argument with its new translation. Overall, this project was well
put together and engaging, which I believe is very important in such a big
class. It was fun to watch while still being educational and helpful to the
entire class.
I thought that the second group that went was the most
entertaining. They gave an accurate depiction of the first play of King Lear
and made it interesting to pay attention to. They seemed as though they
rehearsed a lot, and I felt that the interpretation they took from the act was
very close to how I interpreted it as well. It was the actions and characters
of Shakespeare put into a modern context – very effective. They did a
good job of speaking loudly and clearly, and presented well. The third group,
as well, had a very creative rendition of King Lear. I liked the Òpolice stationÓ
idea, and giving out donuts in class is a sure-fire way to keep people engaged.
I thought it was a good idea for them to explore the ending of the play, in
which nearly everyone dies. This is a difficult portion to investigate because
there are many different conclusions that can be drawn. This group could have
gone more in depth into the motives behind each characterÕs actions, but for
presentation purposes, I thought that the portrayal of the story was effective.
They really engaged class participation. By witnesses not telling the story
accurately, it gave the class more opportunities to correctly portray the
events (and get donuts). Overall, I think that the third group had the
best idea and the second group had the best acting/performance.
Out of all the presentations, my favorite was Group 12, who
acted out scene one from King Lear. I thought it was a creative idea to change
the language into modern terms that would be easy for our age group to
understand. The group did a very thorough job at depicting everything that
happened in the scene. All of the members were also really good at acting, and
I was presently surprised. It seemed like they put a lot of effort into
recreating the scene and portraying all the emotions. I was also impressed with
the fact that they changed their characters throughout and stayed true to the
character they were portraying. They also made the scene humorous, which made
it very enjoyable to watch. Overall, it looked like they put a lot of effort
into making their portrayal enjoyable and accurate at the same time.
William ShakespeareÕs King Lear is one of the most famous
pieces of literature ever written; however, it is not easy for a modern day
student to understand. In turn, I thought that the group who performed their
own rendition of King Lear in modern day English was very successful in
relaying the key points from the script while also making it entertaining and
easier to understand. I thought that the humor used in the re-written script
was very engaging and appropriate for a college aged audience. I know many
students struggled with understanding ShakespeareÕs language (I being one of
them) so I found it very useful to hear the play in modern day language. There
were some key points that I had missed because of the language barrier and so
this group helped me understand the text in more depth. Shakespeare used some
humor and underlying emotion that I was not able to necessarily pick up on
because of the language and so seeing the group actually act out the characters
really helped bring them to life for me. I felt a whole new sense of resentment
between the sisters this time, something that I didnÕt feel as strongly in the
text; however, I feel this was because I did not connect as when with the
language Shakespeare was using. I think that Shakespeare is a writer that
everyone should indulge in during their lifetime because he is so famous and
his work is timeless. I also think that having presentations like these is
necessary because it helps students engage in the work more in depth and helps
us better understand key points/the plot of the ShakespeareÕs literature.
I chose the second group because I really liked their
premise for their project. The play of King Lear is written in old English and
is at times difficult to understand the types of emotions being conveyed
because of the different word choice or the kind of person that would be saying
each line. This group did an excellent job interpreting the first act and
changing it into modern vocabulary. Each person in the group did an excellent
job of playing the character(s) they were acting out. Their interpretation made
the scene seem like the type of bickering a normal family would have only in a
much more extreme situation, it also did a great job of displaying the sarcasm,
irony, and character traits of each person in the scene. The group translated
the lines well and made it very funny and realistic. The acting was good, they
kept the whole class entertained and you learned the scene better because in my
opinion it was much more interest, so overall I believe this group did an
excellent job with their project.
I found the group (12) that performed the 1st scene of the
Shakespeare play, "King Lear", to be extremely insightful. This scene
of the play brings about a strong theme of the play which pits greed against
loyalty. On the one side, the daughters Goneril and Regan use flattery to
obtain the most wealth from their father, King Lear. On the other,
the daughter Cordelia refuses to follow her sisters' strategy to
obtain as much wealth as possible, and suggests that her father does not need
to be flattered with exaggeration, rather her love should already be understood
and not lying to her father shows her loyalty to him. Furthermore, the outcome
of the play implies the positives of loyalty and the negatives that can occur when people act based on greed. In a sense,
this theme of greed is still present and a critical dynamic in today's society.
Nearly everyone is guilty of acting based on greed and obtaining wealth. Making
sure that your actions based on greed are ethical is a prevalent issue of
today's society. Nothing makes this clearer than the outcome of Shakespeare's
play, wherein greed causes lots of unnecessary death. This is not to say that
greed should be done away with, but that greed has to be utilized correctly or
else all hell can and will break loose. Moreover, there seems to be two sides
to greed. Greed can be wonderful thing that benefits all parties or greed can
lead parties to lose trust in one another and, consequentially,
act deceitful and violent towards one another.
Group 12 (the group that performed act 1 scene 1) really
stood out to me. They were able to portray the scene with humor and modern
language. They had creative props and the signs were easily readable so that we
knew which characters were talking at the time. The scene was really easy to
follow and it kept my attention because it was so funny! All the members of the
group did a really good job acting and knowing their lines. All of their voices
projected really well so we could hear exactly what they were saying. The
performance actually enhanced my understanding of Act 1 Scene 1 and I enjoyed
watching it. Their performance was simple but so effective, and overall I think
they did a really great job with it.
The group that stood out to me the most in their
presentation was the second group performing Act 1 Scene 1 of King Lear. This
group had the most effective presentation in my eyes, because they didnÕt read
directly off of a script the whole time. The scene started out very strong with
the actress that played King Lear, as she was very talented. The acting level
for all of the presenters was much better than I expected when they all walked
on stage. They did a very good job of sticking to the original storyline, with
Goneril and Regan kissing up to their father in order to get land. Cordelia was
also portrayed very well, as she was honest and faithful to her father. She
gave no false flattery in order to trick her father into bestowing her land,
she only told him how much she truly loved him. This group did a great job of
making you feel for the characters, such as Cordelia when King Lear made her
sob in the corner. However it also had a humorous aspect to it also. Every
person in the group played multiple roles except for the actress that acted out
King LearÕs part. This made for quite a few funny situations, in which the
group members would quickly change back and forth between opposing characters
with a flip of their sign. Another humorous addition to the play was the Nerf
gun that the actress playing King Lear whipped out from behind her back to
point at Kent. This modern and unexpected addition had the whole class laughing
and really helped them hold their audience until the end of the scene.
Though I thought all of the projects were great in their
own respects, I enjoyed the reenactment of Act 1, Scene 1 of King Lear the
most. I thought Group 12 did an excellent job of illustrating this scene, one
of the most important in the play, in a way that everyone could understand.
Though we went through that scene in class discussion, and I felt that I had a
pretty good grasp on what takes place here between King Lear and his daughters,
the group's reenactment provided a source of further insight and enlightenment
by relaying the dialogue in layman's terms. They followed the plot perfectly
and brought each of the characters to life in their own unique way. The
visualization that they provided was a better modern remake of the play than
the video even, because the scene was transcribed in a way that made it
accessible to everyone. I was also really impressed by all of the great acting
skills, and the fact that each person played more than one role in the scene
was true to the presentation of most Shakespearean plays in which the actors
played more than one role. The fact that all of the actors were very energetic
and really got into their roles made their presentation that much more
entertaining to watch. "Cordelia" especially did a great job switching
back and forth between her role as Cordelia and her role as France. All in all,
the presentation was very well put together and fun to watch.
The presentation that stood out the most to me during this
round of presentations was group 12. They did an interpretation of a scene in
King Lear using modern English. I liked the fact that they took the time to
explain the reasoning behind their choice in what scene they wanted to do,
rather than just jumping straight into it. They had to cut out some parts due
to time constraints and most of the group members had to play multiple
characters but I feel it was all very well executed. They translated the lines
from ShakespeareÕs English into modern day English which really made things
clear and easy to understand. The actors themselves were expressive and played
their parts very well. In particular, the girl playing Lear really managed to
get across the depth of LearÕs madness and showed how unreasonable and
irrational he was being. The nerf gun really surprised me too. It was
unexpected and came completely out of left field and I loved every second of
it. One other group that really managed to grab my attention was the one that
did a comparison between King Lear and Akira KurosawaÕs Ran. I knew of Kurosawa
but had never really seen any of his work. The film showed obvious parallels
between the two works but still managed to be different enough so that doesnÕt
seem like itÕs just copying and pasting King Lear into medieval Japan. It was
nice to see and Eastern interpretation of a Western classic. I felt that these
presentations really helped me gain a better understanding of the course
materials.
The presentation that caught my attention most was the
first King Lear speech. The group started out by giving a brief background
of the time and setting of King Lear. King Lear is about to die and must
distribute his kingdom between his three daughters; Goneril, Regan and
Cordelia. The first two daughters started out with clear voices and great eye
contact to grasp the audiences attention from the start. Both Goneril and
Regan are awarded one third of the their fathers kingdom. Last to
serenade is Cordelia, she tells her father although she loves him very much she
is not going to lie to win is love. King Lear then flips out in outrage,
and concludes to leave Cordelia with nothing. CordeliaÕs
actress used facial and hand gestures to show her dismay to bring the story to
life. Kent attempts to convince King Lear that he is being unfair and
should reconsider his decision. King Lear then goes into rage mode once
again and decides to banish Kent from the Kingdom. The performer of King
LearÕs part did an excellent job using energy and authority on stage to portray
the characters distress and anger. Next to enter the scene is Bergundy,
France and Cordelia. This was a very solid/ easy to follow transition with the
changing of the name tags. France ultimately decides to marry Cordelia
without the inheritance, stating that the money and land is not important to
him. One major strength of this presentation was the use of name tags to
distinguish the characters. The dialogue incorporated throughout
this skit was not only interesting but also made this ancient piece of
literature easy to follow.
The project that stood out the most to me was that of group
twelve. This group acted out Act 1, Scene 1 from King Lear, by William
Shakespeare. Each group member had a double sided name tag that they wore
around their neck. The name tags were double sided so each person could act as
more than one character in the scene. This group translated William
Shakespeare's poetry from old English, that is very difficult for many of us to
interpret, into more modern English. This gave the presentation character and
also allowed for the audience to easily follow the scene. The translation they
made also added some comic flare to the scene and made it there own, while
still making sure to portray the meaning of the play. In this scene King Lear
is deciding how he will be splitting up the kingdom and how much he will be
giving to each of his daughters. He asks each daughter to tell him how much
they love him. Goneril and Regan both speak as if they love Lear very much and
think highly of him. This group did a great job of showing the insincerity in
the characters and how each of them had their own wants in mind. When it is
Cordelia's turn to portray her love for him and she won't speak. Lear then
disowns her and decides to not give her any part of the kingdom. I liked this
presentation because they were a very confident group and seemed to have
practiced their presentation many times. They showed a clear understanding of
the scene and what the characters motives were through out the play. The only
props they had were the name tags to identify which character was speaking and
a map which gave a visualization of King Lear splitting up the kingdom to his
daughters.
I think that all the groups did a very good job of
analyzing King Lear, and all of them took very different approaches for
addressing and analyzing the book. Group 12 was the most helpful for me. The
language used by Shakespeare can often be very difficult to understand, so it
was very interesting to see a modern day twist on the words. It made the scene
much more understandable. It was very clear that King Lear wanted his daughters
to say how great he was and Cordelia was rolling her eyes off to the side
knowing that her sisters were full of it but trying to build him up to get the
most land that they could. It was very helpful to see it acted out. The group
members did very well on stage and seemed to be having a lot of fun with their
performance. They seemed like they had rehearsed it quite a bit and did not
have to look at their cue cards the whole time. They seemed pretty comfortable
being on stage. It was even a little comical at times, such as with the Nerf
gun. They discussed the themes of the story before they started acting. It was
interesting and helpful to hear what these were and to see how they related to
the scene that was performed. The entire presentation seemed like there was a
lot of effort put into it and it paid off.
For the projects that presented on May first, my two
favorite were Group 12 and Group 13. I liked Group 12's presentation because it
was very creative in the realm of theater and dramatic performance. I was
thankful for their big name tags, so you could see who each actor was supposed
to be portraying. I also liked the fact that they translated the play into
modern English! It was much easier to follow and made it that much more
interesting because you could be less confused and pay more attention to what
the substance of the text was saying. Overall, it was very funny and creative.
I think it was especially funny when King Lear pulled out a water gun and
threatened Kent. They obviously spent many hours rehearsing and memorizing
their lines. My other favorite group was Group 13. They made the whole play of
King Lear into something more modern, like you would see on a C.S.I. Show, or
possibly an episode of Law and Order. The props were good, but the donuts were
the best part! They really encouraged interaction with the audience by giving
out donuts for answering questions. Overall, Group 13 gave a solid performance
because it was creative and modern, while still being different from Group 12's
creative and modern approach to King Lear.
I thought many of the presentations delivered on May 1 were
well done, however, the one I favored a little more than the others was Group
12. The group essentially acted out a majority of Act 1 Scene 1 of William
Shakespeare's King Lear. The four group members
were cast in multiple roles to accommodate what the scene required in a comical
farce of the actual source material. From the presentations on King Lear, I
found the second group most interesting. They took what they knew from the play
and interpreted that into modern English making it easier to understand. There
were four people in the group who each played two roles each. The interpreted
act 1 of King Lear and started with the first scene. In scene one, King Lear is
passing his burden on to whichever of his daughters loves him most. When he
asks them, 2 of the daughters give him compliments and love him dearly.
Cordelia, the other daughter, doesnÕt have anything to say; she loves the king like
a daughter should love a father but nothing more. The play had a very realistic
approach to it, they used toy guns to threaten each other and talk normally to
each other. As the play goes on the two daughters who equally love their father
decide they need to work together to get what they want. Different men come in
with the intention of getting Cordelia with her fatherÕs assets. King Lear does
not give his blessing, therefore, the men doing the offering do not accept
except for one who chooses to take Cordelia regardless. Overall, I thought this
group had a very creative way of thinking of the project. The reading can be
difficult to understand at times and it was nice to have something more clear
and understandable.
In my opinion, Group 12 delivered the best and most
meaningful presentation during todayÕs round of projects. They opted to act out
a scene from King Lear like a play, however they substituted the original
language with contemporary dialogue. The modern language made the story much
easier to follow and fun to watch. The dialogue in the original story is very
hard to understand, so using contemporary dialogue was a great choice. The
language the group used also made the presentation comical and made the
audience pay attention, which is important. Because the group was acting out
the scene, their voices were loud and projected across the room. This made it
easy to hear and understand, whereas other groups tend to be more quiet and not
as easy to follow. I enjoyed the fact that the group also improvised with the
use of the name cards. This allowed each member to act out two characters
instead of only one. This added another element of humor into the project. For
the most part, the group members had their lines memorized and did not rely on
note cards whatsoever. This was an important factor, because it allowed for a
more fluid flow in the presentation, and was a fresh alternative to other
groups who simply read material off of their note cards. However, what gave
Group 12 a lasting impression on the audience was the humor. It seemed the
group was having fun during the presentation, which made the audience have fun
as well. You could tell that the group had practiced the performance
beforehand, so they could just let loose and have fun with it during the
presentation. Overall, Group 12 had a solid performance with very few flaws in
my opinion and provided a fresh take to King Lear, I commend them for their
effort.
Group 12Õs modern reenactment of Act 1 from ÒKing LearÓ and
Group 15Õs video on Francis BaconÕs four Idols are tied for being my
favorite/most meaningful performances from yesterday, 5/1/2012. The first
performance, the ÒKing LearÓ reenactment, was well rehearsed. The actors rarely
had to read off of their note cards and performed their parts with energy.
Furthermore, the lines were sufficiently reduced to their core ideas (no
extraneous fluff!) and into easily understood, modern English. I especially
liked the changing of the name sign (and voice) during the France/Cordelia
sequence of lines. It would have been odd if the target of the lines had been
each other (France to Cordelia, and vice versa), but since the target was Lear,
it all worked out. Also, I liked the redone conflict between Kent and Lear; the
(toy) gun was an amusing addition. Imagine if Lear (an old man) had actually
shook a weapon (sword, gun, or otherwise) at Kent while he had been behaving
unreasonably! Would Kent have been brave enough to come back to court as Caius?
The second performance, the 4 Idols video, came rather as a relief to me; IÕd
barely understood every tenth word in the actual ÒNovum OrganumÓ text.
Therefore, I appreciated having all the Idols summarized and given examples.
The text for the definition of each Idol was hard to read (too big to fit the
screen and too fast going up the screen), but from the following examples (with
well-chosen video clips from a variety of sources), I think I managed to
understand some of what the original text was saying. Well done.
Group 12 presented a very well integrated analysis of King
Lear with a summary and enactment of one of the scenes. Using the scene where
King Lear performs his Òlove testÓ to see which of his daughters deserve his
wealth, Group 12 depicts the themes of insecurity and madness within Lear and
the shallow appearance of love versus that of true love. They reinforce these
themes with modern day props and stereotypes. For instance GonerilÕs voice and
tone resembles that of a Òvalley girlÓ. This modern stereotype implies that
those who speak and act this way are materialistic, shallow, and selfish. When
Goneril combines this tone with her declaration of daughterly love, I can very
clearly understand that her actions are dishonest and do not reflect her
motive. King LearÕs madness is emphasized with the use of the plastic gun,
which he picks up and points at his reasonable and loyal advisor Kent. The gun
is an extreme and unnecessary weapon for such an argument and the groupÕs use
of it here demonstrates LearÕs lack of reasoning. Kent maintains a low volume
while Lear yells and gestures at him with the gun. This juxtaposition of their
demeanors further highlights LearÕs madness. One last thing that Group 12
effectively portrayed was the polarization of characters in this scene: the
just and the unjust. The actor who transforms from Goneril into Kent shows how
the two characters act differently and receive different reactions from Lear.
Goneril, who is dishonest and caters to LearÕs hubris, is given wealth and
property. Kent, who is honest and speaks up for the well being of his king, is
met with banishment and death threats. These opposing characters are switched
on and off within one actor, ironically contrasting the two. Overall, I really
enjoyed the acting and I believe that the presentation was meaningful and engaging.
The presentation that I found most interesting today was
group 12. Group 12Õs presentation of acting out Act1 Scene1 of King Lear put a
difficult to understand topic into clear and simple terms. This group acted out
the first scene in modern day english and with a modern touch. This engaged me
and the audience as well due to the ease that I was able to understand what was
happening and in what order events happened in. Another piece that we were
exposed to as an audience was the way that this group covered 7 characters with
only 4 people. People playing multiple parts was much like the way original
Shakespeare plays were performed. Within the performance this group used humor
along with the modern language to portray the scene. I think that this was a
creative and effective approach because of the way that it kept the audience
engaged while closely mirroring the original text. My favorite part of the
groups presentation/performance was the way Cordillia and France were played by
the same girl. In one portion of the performance she had parts from both
characters back to back and did a great job distinguishing each character.
Another portion of this presentation that was meaningful to me was the scene
and act that the group chose to perform. Being the base of the play with so
much of the plays foundation being set I now have a greater understanding for
the overall play due to the language that the performance was presented in and
the energy that the actors exerted while putting on a great performance.
I liked the second presentation the best, where they acted
out the first scene of King Lear. They did a good job of acting it out and they
added a few humorous parts to appeal to the class more. The acting made the
scene much more clear to me than just reading the text. I also thought that the
humor made the scene more entertaining. I know that Shakespeare intended that
the scene to be more dramatic than humorous, but I still enjoyed it. It was
also interesting how they used only 4 people to portray 7 different characters,
which was often the case in acting companies performing ShakespeareÕs work. I
also liked how they cut things out of the scene (in order to save time and stay
within the limit) but did not take away from the purpose of the scene. Often
when a scene is heavily changed or reduced you lose a lot of what that scene is
really about and just focus on the main point. This group avoided that, and
showed not only the major plot points but also the details in how King Lear
acted and why. This scene could be seen as the foundation for the whole story,
since what happens in it is what causes the terrible series events to occur.
Finally I liked the use of nametags for identification of characters. Without
costumes, it would have been very difficult to distinguish who is who and when.
Nametags were a clever way of avoiding that issue.
I thought Group 12Õs skit was the most helpful and
entertaining. Act I is a critical part of King Lear, as it creates the context
for the entire play. Group 12 portrayed this critical base extremely well by
translating the scenes to modern day English that the whole class could
understand. They laid out themes that are found throughout the play, such as
the conflict between real and fake love. The group also did well at exposing
the foreshadowing found throughout the act, which hints at major events that
occur later in the play. For instance, the unstable relationship between
Cordelia, Goneril, and Regan was the source of most of the playÕs tension, and
was apparent from the first act. Group 12 did an excellent job at portraying
the dramatic familial issues and bringing to light the underlying context for
the playÕs emotional disasters.
Not only did Group 12 effectively portray the plot, characters, themes,
and foreshadowing of Act I, but they did so in an entertaining fashion that
captured my attention. The group members played their roles with gusto and
enthusiasm. This is often uncommon in group projects, as it is easy to simply
recite lines and dissociate from the characters. However, by using present day
English and putting their own spin on the underlying features of their roles,
the presenters became actors rather than students teaching their class about
King Lear. Seeing the play acted out made me appreciate King Lear on another
level, and solidified Act 1 in my memory.
For Tuesday's class on May 1st, I thought the best group,
and my personal favorite, was Group 12. The re-enacted Scene 1 in
modern-day English, and it was hysterical. I thought it was really funny
that each person in the group played two people and would switch off characters
in the middle of a scene. I also thought that their translation made
understanding the scene much easier and a lot more enjoyable. It was
definitely surprising that the King Lear had a gun in the their translation,
but it definitely contributed to their comedy of their skit. It was also
impressive that they memorized all of their lines. Overall it was a great
re-enactment and a great performance.
My favorite presentation was the group that did a modern
reenactment of Act one from King Lear. They did an excellent job
presenting the material in a fun and understandable way. They were able to
portray most of the characters in that scene with just a few actors themselves.
The signs that they wore around their necks made it easy for the audience
to keep track of which character was speaking. The more modern spin on this act
kept the audience engaged. Witty responses, firm tones, hand movements,
"girly" responses, and of course the gun, together made this
performance entertaining while still presenting the original story line. You
could easily decipher King Lear and his three daughters from one another by the
responses they gave. Goneril and Regan were both suck ups to their father
while Cordelia gave an honest answer about her love for her father. As
the weeks go on, it is interesting to see each group come up with new and
creative ways to present the material we have been reading and learning about
in class. This group definitely accomplished this and did a great job!
I chose group 12's Act One, Scene One presentation to
critique. This group exemplified their knowledge of King Lear by presenting the
most impactful scene in the story. Recreating the lines in a language more
understandable to us was a great idea. I knew the basics of what this scene was
about, but it was hard to grasp the underlying concepts without the play in
front of me. The group's skit was satirical, easy to follow, and very
informative. I got a much better view of what happened in the story because of
the group's adaptation. I thought it was very clever to have the signs around
everyone's' necks letting the audience know who each person was portraying. I
also found it very funny when the girl playing both Cordelia and the King of
France had a conversation by herself; perfect attitudes of each character. The
other groups were just as entertaining but many of them I could not follow. I
didn't understand what they were trying to get across that we should learn from
the stories. Group 12 really showed they understood the project purpose.
King Lear is not an easy play to tackle. Shakespeare lived
in a very different time from ours and his writing is difficult to decipher.
The second group that presented yesterday was able to make Act 1, Scene 1 more
understandable and fun for the class. By acting out the scene where King Lear
has all of his daughters tell him how much they love him, we were able to get a
comical and personal experience of King Lear. The parts were played very well
and the actress that played King Lear was exceptionally good at projecting her
voice and acting the part. Although they did not have enough actors to play all
the parts, they did a wonderful job of playing multiple roles, just like many
actors did in other Shakespearean play writes. They kept the entire scene funny
and entertaining. It captivated the audience's attention and helped us
understand more the concepts of King Lear and the play's complicated plot. This
was a very enjoyable presentation and I wished they would have continued and
presented the entire play because it was so entertaining.
The group that stood out to me the most was group 12. They
had an absolutely superb modern-day script of act one, scene one of King Lear.
Not only was their translation of the text outstanding but their acting was as
well. Each participant displayed such great enthusiasm, it really made me want
to listen and I am sure it kept everyone very entertained. The pivotal action
in scene one, was when King Lear asks which daughter loves him the most, and I
thought group 12 did a great job of displaying this. When they acted out this
part of the scene they used a map, as many plays of King Lear also does, to
display the segments of land that Lear is giving to has daughters, except for
Cordelia of course. They also assigned multiple roles to each group member,
which I found to be very Shakespearian, as professor Marx also pointed out.
Their two sided name placard they hung from their necks was also a very simple
and witty idea. In all they had a great presentation that stuck to the work
very well, and kept me entertained and intrigued. Great job group 12!
All of the group presentations today were very interesting
but the group I felt had the best project was group 12. This was the group who
acted out the first scene from King Lear. I
enjoyed the way they related a play that was written so long ago to modern day.
They involved the audience by cleverly using the language from the play and
portraying it comedically which kept us as viewer entertained. Even though it
was not intentional I also noticed that this group was able to make use of
double rolls for their actors which was much like in the time of Shakespeare.
The group was able to make clear the key points Shakespeare was trying to
convey without loosing too much of the integrity of the play in translation.
Overall the presentation was very well put together and when coupled with the
other presentation of the day they had the best. I have a better understanding
for having seen the presentations and was able to see how others interpreted
the play through their presentations. A tip I would give to future groups
presenting would be to try not to just play videos or just read from a piece of
paper. These presentations are suppose to be something different then the
lectures we get everyday in class and when you are just reading at the audience
it is a lot less meaningful then actually engaging the audience. This is the
main reason I chose group 12 as a the best presentation.
The most inspirational presentation was that of Group
Twelve. Although a reenactment of Act 1 Scene 1, Group TwelveÕs presentation
added a fresh twist to the time-worn tale of King Lear. Characters within the
reenactment played multiple roles per person. Each presenter wore a
double-sided gigantic necklace around their neck with their characterÕs name
scribed on it in cursive. Upon changing roles, they would flip the name tag,
changing into a different character. The fact that each presenter played two
characters spiced up the skit, adding additional comedic value when the
audience discovered that Grace was playing both ÒCordeliaÓ and her future
husband ÒFrance.Ó The voice changes used by the different characters were also
remarkable. For example, the presenter playing Goneril and Kent would pitch his
voice high for the lady and deep for Kent. In addition to appearances and voice
attributes, presenters ensnared the audience with their use of modern syntax.
For example, towards the start of Act 1, Cordelia expresses her frustration
towards her sistersÕ flattery, declaring to the audience in a sudden outburst: ÒWhat
the crap am I supposed to say?Ó Another example is when the presenter playing
Goneril took on an instant Valley Girl persona as he pitched his voice high and
used ÒlikeÓ in every other word.
Props also played a minor role in Group TwelveÕs presentation. In
addition to the classy nametags, Twelve used a giant map taped onto the
blackboard to signify LearÕs division of his land. As each daughter was given
land, ÒLearÓ would take a giant highlighter and color in their piece of land on
the map. Overall, Group TwelveÕs presentation was exemplary for its giant
necklaces, modernization, and comedic use of language.
King Lear was a story that I enjoyed reading. The plot of
the story really attracted my attention: it was a tale of betrayal and drama.
It was also a story about trust, which unfortunately Goucester and King Lear
put into the wrong people. King Lear ended up loving the wrong daughters and
was easily swayed by flattery. Both Gonderil and Regan were extremely
greedy and only pretended to love their father. Only Cordelia truly loved Lear;
she knew that love did not have to be spoken and loved her father as much as a
daughter should. The second group that presented (Group 12) demonstrated this
scene quite well. They showed how Cordelia was honest with her feelings while
Gonderil and Regan were full of deceit. All they wanted was wealth and land
from their father: it was basically like they needed to be payed for their
love. Cordelia understood what her sisters were doing, but stuck with her own
feelings. The group put a lot of effort into the acting and made it come alive.
Also instead of sticking with the old english, the group modernized it making
it easier to understand and also adding humor to the scene. The second part of
the group's act was of France and Burgundy being suitors for Cordelia. Burgundy
only wanted Cordelia because he thought he would also receive wealth and land.
He did not actually love her; he was really just greedy. France showed that he
was honest with his feelings and wanted Cordelia for herself not because of any
other benefits that would come with her. This group acted very well and put
their emotions into the scene and expressed these scenes thoroughly.
My favorite group from yesterdays set of presentations was
group 12. Their presentation of act I scene I dramatically increased my
understanding of the reading. I attribute most of that quality to their
outstanding ability to translate the text into modern, almost collegiate,
language. This shows that they actually understood the text line for line. I
found that cutting certain characters from their interpretation of the scene
showed excellent planning. Also the way they doubled up their roles to achieve
the maximum of eight characters was quite shakespearian and true to the style
of the text. I would have learned significantly more about king lear if the
other groups continued the trend but with scene 2 and etc.
I thought that the group that performed Act I Scene 1 of
King Lear did an excellent job! I really enjoyed the fact that they changed the
somewhat complicated language used in the original into more modern terms so it
was easier to understand. It was very comical and relatable as well! I enjoyed
that the students played multiple characters which added a funny twist to the
France and Cordelia storyline. Also very impressed that it was memorized for
the most part! Excellent presentation!
The presentation where the group acted out act one, scene
one of King Lear, I believe it was group 12, was the most meaningful to me. It
was easy to understand, entertaining, and it seemed like they put a lot of
effort in to memorize their lines. Also, I had read King Lear in high school
and we had a similar project to do so I really connected with what the group
did. I thought their translation was pretty accurate and entertaining as well.
When trying to read King Lear, I had a hard time so I often used the No Fear
Shakespeare translation, which helped a lot. I felt like their presentation was
almost like the No Fear Shakespeare acting version. It was a nice touch to have
the map on the wall as a prop, as well as the water gun. I liked that they
tried to make it funny for the audience while maintaining the accuracy of the
scene. The nametags were done well and it was great to see all of the main
characters of the scene represented. I liked that the men played females and
the one female played a male. When ShakespeareÕs plays were performed, men had
to play women so it really added to the groupÕs presentation. The groupÕs
presentation was geared to satisfy the audience, but IÕm sure the group members
got a greater understanding of Shakespeare by translating the work and getting
into character. It is not easy to act, so I admire all of them for trying. I am
so used to just reading plays that it was really cool to see one acted out.
The second group's presentation on May 1st was my favorite
and most entertaining to watch. By interpreting King Lear into a modern day
version, it gave me better insight of William Shakespeare's literature pieces.
The dialogue of the script was easy to understand and a great representation of
the scene they performed. As an audience member, this presentation looked well
rehearsed compared to all the other groups. They memorized their dialogue,
positions to be on stage, and practiced projection. It was very easy to hear
everything each group member was saying even from the back of the classroom.
This is an important factor because it is very frustrating when the audience
cannot hear what the characters are saying. Not only did the projection allow
the audience to listen, this also gave them confidence. Their nature on stage
appeared more engaging and natural especially since they did a good job
memorizing their lines. I also appreciated the signs they made with the
character they were acting to indicate who they were. Since the majority had
acted out two different characters, this made it less confusing for the
audience. Overall, this presentation was one of the better one's performed on
this day.
Out of all of the group projects presented this past
Thursday, I believe that Group 12, the group that acted out Act I, Scene 1 of
King Lear, was the most creative and thoughtful. The group did an amazing
job of rewriting the script in modern language and vernacular, so the entire
class could follow along easily and fully comprehend and understand the first
scene. One of the things that I thought was entertaining, was that the
group did not limit themselves to only four characters, and doubled up on
roles. This is true to a lot of plays that were presented during the
Shakespearean era so that was a nice touch. I thought it was smart to
have the girl that played Cordelia, play France as well. It made the
dialogue between the two hilarious. I believe that the group picked a
good scene to do as well, since this scene is the basis for the rest of the
play, and introduces the audience to most of the characters. The name
plates were a great idea, since the group played multiple characters, and the
class could have easily gotten confused. I was very amused by this
presentation. It could have easily been a bad project if the group did
not act out the scene with drama and emotion, but they did an excellent job
acting. I never became bored or uninterested during their presentation,
and I now have a better grasp of Act I, scene 1 of King Lear.
All the presentations for King Lear were very well done.
My favorite presentation was by the group that did a modern day renactment of
King Lear. Their acting was very entertaining and believable. I
particulary enjoyed the use of signs to denote which character they were
playing. Their updated langauge of King Lear was very easy to understand
and perfect for the play. I thought the girl playing King Lear did a
fantastic job of potraying him. The actress who played Cordelia did a
great job as well. There were many instances where I could not stop
laughing and humor is always a good thing. In my opinion they were far
and away the best group. Although they were not the most creative, their
preparation was evident in their presentation. Every group member
exhibited excellent poise and acting skills.
All of the groups that presented yesterday were creative
and brought the stories new insight. I liked group 12 the best because out of
all the presentations this quarter, no one has done live acting. The group
members were extremely theatrical and made scene 1 of King Lear come alive. The
modernized version of the lines also made it easy and enjoyable to listen to. I
thought the girl who played King Lear did exceptionally well and showed how mad
and crazy he was going in response to his daughter, Cordeilla's non-comment on
her love for him. It was intense and probably how King Lear would have actually
reacted. I also liked how the actors wore signs that they would reverse each
time they changed character. It made the audience laugh and i think that is
important because everyone was paying close attention!
The presentations for ShakespeareÕs King Lear were all very
entertaining, however I found group 12Õs presentation outstanding. When the
group presented you could really feel that they had worked hard on their
project and really wanted to keep the audienceÕs attention. They all acted out
act 1 scene 1 of King Lear. Each member in the group played two different
characters; I found this interesting since this is how most ShakespeareÕs plays
work. They had nametags to help decipherer who was who at what time. They would
switch the nametags over when they were playing a different character. There
interpretation of the scene was really funny. They translated everything into
modern English so the audience could have a better understanding of it. I feel
that choosing the first scene of the play was advantageous for everyone
involved because it gives everyone an idea of what the rest of the play is going
to be. The group shared this information with the audience before they started
to scene. They explained that the opening scene foreshadows some things that
happen later in the play, such as the two evil sisters turning against their
father. The group also gave a description of the scene and some of the
limitations they faced with only having 4 members in a group. I feel this was
important to give the audience some context before they watch the scene. The
group clearly practiced their lines thoroughly and therefore amused their
audience with their acting skills. Their modern English allowed for humor to be
imbedded throughout the scene. It made it very easy to understand what the
scene really meant and how the rest of the play was going to go. Shakespeare is
very hard to understand, but this group made it easy and fun to watch and
listen to.
Although I thought all groups did a wonderful job on their
presentations yesterday, the one that I connected the most with was group 12Õs
presentation, who reenacted out part of King Lear, where Cordelia did not tell
her dad how much she loved him and the consequences that followed. I
really enjoyed their performance because it was entertaining, creative, and
well executed. Everyone in the group did a great job acting out their
characters, especially the girl who played King Lear. I like how she captured
the essence of how mad he truly was when his youngest daughter, Cordelia, did
not profess how much she loved him. I thought it was clever how some
people in the group played more than one character, which allowed them to
display the characters attitudes towards certain events. I also enjoyed their
presentation because it was humorous while it still got their point across. By
recreating the scene in modern day language, it made it more relatable to us
students and made it easier to grasp the concepts within the scene. I
like that their presentation brought up the issue of family because it is very
relatable for a lot of people; IÕm not saying to that extreme, but a lot of
siblings fight over who gets what and a lot of the times in families there are
jealousies and power problems that get in the way of what family should really
be about. All in all, I thought their presentation was great and portrayed a
lot of useful information.
There were several great presentations on King Lear and the
Francis Bacon Essays, but the one that stood out the most to me as the most
meaningful and memorable was Group 12Õs live interpretation of Act One, Scence
One from William ShakespeareÕs King Lear. The took the old English
Shakespearian text and translated it into a modern day English rendition that
made the themes and plots easier to understand. I appreciated the
modernization of the dialogue while maintaining plots and themes from the book
in order to make the story more relatable to our generation. My only
criticism would be that I wished they had jumped into the act sooner. They
opened with an extensive explanation of the themes that we were about to see,
which was less effective than the actual portrayal of the themes through their
acting. They accurately presented the initial scene where King Lear
distributes his land among his daughters based on their profession of love for
him. The scene set up much of the themes and plots that continued through
the story, and they explained the situation well. The dialogue between
the two girls appeared especially well rehearsed and displayed convincing
acting skills. I also liked how they switched between characters to cover
all the necessary roles; it offered an authentic Shakespearian performance with
a touch of comedy in the quick role reversals. I enjoy any presentation
that can take text in a difficult to read format such as King Lear and
interpret it an a way that clearly communicates the themes and ideas to
its audience.
The most meaningful presentation that I saw today was
preformed by group #12. They reenacted act 1 scene 1 from King Lear but
they modified it slightly to use modern English and cut down on the amount of
characters in true Shakespearian spirit. I enjoyed this presentation because
the group was able to bring the characters of the play to life while at the
same time interpreting the story for us. I was able to understand more
clearly all of the emotions and reactions of each character when the group used
common language we hear every day to represent their feelings. This group
had good performers that acted well and displayed attitudes that correlate to
the written story. One part of the play that was most helpful for me in
understanding the play was the reaction of the duke of Burgandy to King Lear
stripping Cordelia of her inheritance. The group showed how the duke needed the
land and money but the Duke of France didn't and valued Cordelia for her love
instead of her property. The group did a good job of entertaining
the audience with humor and drama while showing us an embodiment of each
characters persona in a modern world.
William ShakespeareÕs King Lear could be difficult to read
for most people, including me. There were a few times I did not know what a
certain word or phrase meant without having to look at the notes on the side of
the reading (or even from the notes in class). The fact that group number
twelve decided to re-enact the beginning scene of King Lear was not only funny
and entertaining to watch, but it made the story easier to understand and more
realistic. When the group members were speaking in terms that we would normally
hear in a regular conversation it made me think about language and how a certain
word or phrase in one language can have a completely different meaning in
another. When I studied Shakespearean, or Elizabethan, language and compared it
to contemporary language, the language I know and comprehend, it was amazing to
see such differences in the meaning of such simple words. If I were to learn
the Elizabethan language and begin to use the language in my daily
conversations, the chances of other individuals understanding what I am saying
would be slim to none. It is intriguing to know that English, a somewhat simple
yet complex language, can be transformed so drastically over hundreds of years
for reasons I could only assume were for the better communication among the
American and European people.
All of the projects that were presented on Tuesday May 1st
were very well thought out and executed. It was extremely evident to me that
all the groups took the time to brainstorm about how to best relate their
projects to their chosen topics. However, there was one project that stood out
the most to me. This project was group 2Õs modern language King Lea,r scene
one, performance. The members of this group took a lot of time and incorporated
extreme creativity and humor to create a modernized King Lear scene. They took
into account the characters personalities and portrayed them very well. I
particularly enjoyed the character of Cordelia. This characterÕs attitude and
pure love for her father was represented extremely well. Being a member of the
audience I was very entertained watching the scene play out. King Lear in the
play was very over the top and foolish just like the original character. The
group members really went above and beyond by throwing themselves into the
characters shows and not being embarrassed to really become the character they were
playing. The time this group must have spent on rehearsing their lines and
practicing the scene as a whole made the project even better. It was clear that
this performance was not a thrown together project and a great amount of time
and effort was put into making this an entertaining, funny project.
All of the groups did an awesome job of analyzing the text
and creating their own plots to go with King Lear. I believe Group #12
was the best with their acting of the beginning of the story. They were
very smooth and well practiced which helped me follow the story better. It
was so fluent and natural that I actually imagined the students being their
characters in my mind. I realized that it must have taken much practice
to know when to switch characters and attitudes to follow the actual story. Although
this group picked one of the easiest scenes in the story to interpret, they did
a thorough job of analyzing the internal meanings of the text and translating
that to current day English. Through this clear interpretation, it was
evident that the members of this group completely understood the plot of King
Lear. This group has been one of the best to keep the audience engaged
and interested in the presentation.
The Project by group 12 was in my opinion the best project
of the day. While the other groups did a great job, this group stood out to me.
Their portrayal of act I scene 1 of King Lear was both comical and insightful.
I liked how the characters changed roles much like that of a real Shakespearian
play. The funniest part of it all was went the girl who played Cordelia also
played France and she had a banter back and fort with herself as two different
characters. I appreciated that the play was comical and yet serious at the same
time. They were able to make the audience laugh but still did a great job
portraying the scene. They did change the scene a little from the original play
but it was only in order to act it out in class, which was understandable. The
scene they acted out is where King Lear asks his daughters to come into his
chamber states he will divide his kingdom between them if they tell him how
much they love him. He asks them which one loves him the most and his two
oldest daughters Regan and Goneril flatter him with love, but his youngest daughter
Cordelia refuses to speak and flatter him. He disowns Cordelia and gives his
kingdom to his other two daughters. Cordelia was supposed to marry the duke of
Burgundy (in class they called him Edmund) but due to her losing her
inheritance he no longer wants her. The king of France ends up taking her as
his queen and they leave LearÕs kingdom together. Meanwhile Regan and Goneril
scheme together to take more of the power away from their father.
I found all the presentations to be very well done and helpful,
but I found number 12 to be the most meaningful to me. The project
highlighted Act 1, Scene 1 of King Lear. They translated the passage into
modern day English and acted it out in a way that made it very easy to
understand. They gave personality and enthusiasm to the characters.
I also liked that they didnÕt just read what it said in King Lear, but actually
analyzed what it would mean to people now. The four students displayed
all the roles of King Lear and his daughters in a comical way, while showing
how Lear would divide up his land to them. It was entertaining to see
them each play more than one role and it showed some irony between the
characters. They really captured the relationships between the characters
and made it easy for me, as a member of the audience, to understand the
significance of the scene. They showed the relationship between Lear and
Cordelia and how he disowns her because she will not show the love to him that
his other daughters will. The relationship between the characters was
carried out through the whole presentation and was made into a more comical
representation of the original work. Overall, I enjoyed this presentation
because it kept me engaged and helped me to better understand King Lear.
The most important part of these presentations is to teach the class another
way to look at a piece of literature and I believe group 12 really did that.
The presentation by group 2 on May 1, 2012 was interesting
and insightful. Group 2 did an excellent job throughout their presentation.
Their project, a play based on the reading, gave a more understandable and much
less antiquated version of the book. The group started by setting the
stage for the first scene in which the children of King Lear were to receive
land. This scene, the first scene of the play began with King Lear
hearing complements from his first 2 children. Many characters were left
out but the group was still able to cover 8 characters with 4 people which was
impressive. With the 8 characters being portrayed the story came to
life. King Lear was portrayed perfectly. King Lear gave land to the
characters that sucked up to him the most and none to Cordelia who used to be
his favorite child. This showed that there was clearly something wrong with
his emotional and mental states. Kent was also portrayed perfectly; as a
character that cared about others, but was still shunned. Later,
CordeliaÕs suitors come and discuss the terms of the marriage proposal.
Hers suitors do not want her because she is not given anything from King
Lear. She ends up leaving with France on bad terms with her other
siblings. The siblings, Regan and Goneril realize that the father has
become irrational and decide to back each other. Overall the play was
full of humor and well thought out. The group incorporated all of the
important parts and portrayed each character very accurately and satirically.
Group 13
Of the projects presented on May 1st, group 13Õs presentation had the most meaning to me. The detective character was funny, especially to the audience because the questions he asked were so obvious to us, having Òbeen thereÓ through reading the play. I also thought it was clever that they made it a sort of quiz for the class, and the donuts were definitely a good incentive to answer their questions (and they also poked fun at the stereotype of the donut-eating policeman). This presentation made good use of direct quotations from the text to corroborate the ÒevidenceÓ that the audience presented. This also helped the audience to understand those quotes in the text, as Shakespeare is difficult for many of us to understand, and I thought that was helpful. I also thought it was cool to see the story from the perspective of each of the characters who were being questioned, and to see what each character knew and didnÕt know, and the charactersÕ reactions to the situation. The group also highlighted the fact that nobody cared at all when Edmund died. Considering that Edmund was an important figure in England at that point in the story, when the presentation highlighted that nobody cared about EdmundÕs death it made me think of how little the common people care about their rulers, and vice versa. This is reminiscent of King LearÕs Òsermon on the heathÓ where he notes that while he was a ruler, he never cared enough about the plight of his own people. Finally, the groupÕs presentation of an alternate happy ending was creative. The idea of an alternate happy ending also has historical significance since many people who produced the play did so with an alternate ending, saying that the original ending was too sad and bleak.
Group Thirteen's presentation had the greatest and most
positive impact on me because they got the whole class involved. I liked the
idea of creating a police investigation about the deaths that occurred
throughout King Lear. Their presentation gave a good overview of the plot,
introduced the main characters, was entertaining, and got the audience
involved. I personally found their presentation helpful because I got caught up
in a lot of the little details while reading King Lear, and I found the reading
to be confusing. This group's presentation definitely helped to clear things up
for me and helped me to see the bigger picture. They kept me interested by
asking the audience questions and by being funny. Overall, I thought they did a
great job creating an informational yet amusing presentation that was very
unique.
I was taken off guard by Group 13Õs presentation of ÒKing
LearÓ in the form of a police interrogation. An extremely creative performance,
it modernized ShakespeareÕs play and was a lot of fun listening to. Characters
who were still alive by the end of the play were portrayed as witnesses to all
of the deaths. Deaths of the play included Cordelia, Regan, Goneril, King Lear,
Edmund, Gloucester, Cornwall, Oswald, and lots of other minor characters. The
group played a policeman as the interrogator and Kent, a servant of Edmund, and
Albany as the witnessesÕ. They even incorporated the audience by directing some
of their questions towards us, and answers were rewarded with donuts!
Personally, nothing gets me wanting to participate more than free donuts, and
it was a genius way to seamlessly use stereotypes to their advantage. While
real life experience with police questioning is hard to come by, the majority
of college students can relate the act to one of the many popular cop TV shows.
Each actor delved into acts glimpsed by their characters, such as Òwho was the
last to confront EdmundÓ or Òwho witnessed the disappearance of GonerilÓ. Unsure
of what he/she saw, the audience was used to identify a suspect but it was the
policeman who was the deciding opinion that put everyoneÕs views together to
construct a suspect. Being a tragedy, they all had plenty to talk about. They
all knew their parts well and made us knowledgeable of ÒKing LearÓ without
simply summarizing the play.
The most meaningful project to me was Group 3, a police
review of King Lear from witnessesÕ perspectives. I liked this group project
the most because it challenged the class to be reminded of the facts about King
Lear. The police man with donuts was asking witnesses about King LearÕs story
and they would get confused so the audience would have to say the correct
answer in order to get a doughnut. One question was about King LearÕs
death and the ÒwitnessÓ couldnÕt remember what happened after he died. I
thought this was a very clever way for the group to incorporate the audience in
the presentation. Unlike most, this presentation made the audience really
listen, there was food rewards so I think that was a big motivator! The group
project also was the most meaningful to me because the acting was very good as
well. Although most of the acting came from the police man, he was in character
the whole time and the presentation seemed more like a play rather than someone
reading off of a power point presentation. I thought it was very clever how
this group incorporated the motivation for the class. Sometimes, the presentations
can seem a bit repetitive but this one stood out to me especially. The overall
originality caught my attention and it was both informal and entertaining. I
caught myself thinking about the play and answers to the questions that the ÒwitnessesÓ
couldnÕt answer. The presentation had humor and the people were dressed up in
character, you could tell that they practiced and prepared this presentation.
I thought group 13 had the most effective presentation in
class on May 2nd. I was impressed that they were able to incorporate the class,
while maintaining the creative setting for describing the story of King Lear. They very clearly kept the story and characters in the
correct century, however the language and setting was in present day. I thought
their creativity in coming up with such a unique idea was unique, and they
implemented their presentation well. I liked that the Òmain witnessesÓ had gaps
in their statements that allowed the rest of the class to get involved. I
thought they did a fantastic job of keeping the class involved by asking
questions and then giving out doughnuts, which also played into the stereotype
of polices stations and officers, only further enhancing their presentation. By
presenting King Lear in an interesting and
unique way, this group was able to maintain the classÕ attention, improving the
understanding and comprehension of the play for students in the class. They
essentially told the story of King Lear, but in an interactive way. They
clearly demonstrated a strong understanding of the storyline, and were able to
convey that to the class.
My favorite group for Tuesday, May 1st was group number 13.
They displayed information about King Lear through a court and incorporated
interviews from the characters, as well as asked the audience members who were
bystanders of the three cases of death to help out with the cases. The approach
to the project was one I would not have come up with, but they did an excellent
job portraying the important events of King Lear and I thought it was a very
clever way to provide information to the class. The characters, which were
depicted by the group members, summarized the main events that lead up to the
deaths in each one of the case they were identifying. I thought this was a very
efficient way to display information about King Lear and I found it very
interesting and comical. Also, they did a good job of involving the audience
and forcing us to engage in the so-called Òcase.Ó With providing incentives to
engage I felt like people were more willing to participate in the cases. They
used quotes from the text and brought in their own translations, which made the
events very clear for the audience to understand. They picked some of the key
quotations to describe the event adding to the credibility of the presentation
and their own knowledge about the death scene. This group seemed interested
about their project and engaged in the presentation making it more intriguing
for the audience to pay attention to and mentally engage in. I enjoyed
listening to this presentation and found it to make the deaths to King Lear
clearer.
For the projects that presented on May first, my two
favorite were Group 12 and Group 13. I liked Group 12's presentation because it
was very creative in the realm of theater and dramatic performance. I was
thankful for their big name tags, so you could see who each actor was supposed
to be portraying. I also liked the fact that they translated the play into modern
English! It was much easier to follow and made it that much more interesting
because you could be less confused and pay more attention to what the substance
of the text was saying. Overall, it was very funny and creative. I think it was
especially funny when King Lear pulled out a water gun and threatened Kent.
They obviously spent many hours rehearsing and memorizing their lines. My other
favorite group was Group 13. They made the whole play of King Lear into
something more modern, like you would see on a C.S.I. Show, or possibly an
episode of Law and Order. The props were good, but the donuts were the best
part! They really encouraged interaction with the audience by giving out donuts
for answering questions. Overall, Group 13 gave a solid performance because it
was creative and modern, while still being different from Group 12's creative
and modern approach to King Lear.
My favorite group was the one that turned it into a
mystery, with the police officer trying to solve it. It felt like I was at dinner
theater. When they originally walked up I wasnÕt really sure what was going on
because they were wearing clothes that could be worn normally or could be
costumes. Once he explained I really appreciated that they dressed up. I really
liked the spin they put on it. When presenting, they managed to summarize the
story while still keeping it short, which is hard to do. It was cool how they
got the audience involved and to motivate them they brought donuts someone
would get when they answered the questions. The people who played the witnesses
were funny because they would be telling the story how it actually happened and
then they would go off on some tangent and say that something completely absurd
happened instead of following the story. Then the main police guy would say ÒNo
thatÕs not what happened. Does anyone here know?Ó And that is when the audience
got to get involved, so it gave us a chance to review what happened in the play
as well. Someone would answer and then get a donut. The donuts were funny to me
because it fit in with the theme of the police. I really enjoyed watching their
performance. While all of the performances were entertaining, I thought this
one was very creative and kept the audience
All the presentations that were presented today were very
clever. It was hard to pick one that really stood out far beyond the rest. With
that being said, I randomly chose Group 13's presentation concerning the SLO
P.D. This group put a lot of thought in coming up with the scenario in which
they were interrogating characters from King Lear about all of the deaths that
occurred in the story. This was sort of like a crime show that is so popular
nowadays on T.V, and definitely appealed to our modern audience. They also did
a great job in getting the audience to interact by giving doughnuts to us
"witnesses" in the audience that volunteered information concerning
all of these deaths. It was enjoyable watching the police getting made fun of
in that respect. The presentation was clearly thought out and showed that the
presenters had a true understanding of the text. The presentation also
refreshed my memory on how all these deaths went down.
All of the groups that presented on May 1st did
an excellent job organizing their projects. The presentation that I enjoyed the
most was group 13. I thought they did the best job on taking the material from
the reading and putting it into an organized and amusing project. I thought it
was very creative to include the class by making us feel as if we were in a
courtroom setting and being questioned. The other three telling their
recollection of the story did a great job emphasizing main parts from King Lear
through a crime scene investigation. It was a clever and engaging way to
capture the audienceÕs attention and keep us thinking. Also the donuts added a
fun twist to the project and I wish I had answered a question right! Another
addition to the project that made it more engaging was the ÒcopÓ outfit that
gave us that real feel of being in a courtroom. This group seemed very prepared
and organized which was clear in their performance. I was able to clearly
understand the context of King Lear through a creative and interesting
presentation. All of the groups did a fantastic job presenting King Lear on
Tuesday, Great Job!
Out of the presentations on May 1st, I personally enjoyed
the project by group 13. This group creatively came up with a
presentation that had a main character of a cop who ÒinterviewedÓ three
witnesses about the ending of the King Lear story. What really drew my attention
to this presentation was the fact that it encompassed different ways of
presenting the information. First, the group participated in a skit in
which each student took the part of a particular character. I appreciated
the effort that went into playing these parts, especially with regards to the
costume of the cop with the props, sunglasses and leather jacket; itÕs always
nice to see that type of effort within a project. Second, the group also
utilized PowerPoint during the presentation. I like how the use of this
wasnÕt the entire project itself, but instead helped aid the presentation in a
visual sense that helped the audience connect the points that were trying to be
made. Third, the group included an aspect of audience participation,
which is something that hasnÕt really been done in a presentation thus far. I
thought this was cool and helped increase audience attention, especially after
the first donut was handed out as a reward for participating in answering a
question asked by the cop. I also appreciated the humor with the donut rewards
since there was the character of the cop; of course a cop would give out donuts
as a reward. It was a clever touch that, in the end, really brought
cohesiveness to the whole presentation. I also thought it appropriate to
comment on the organization of the project. Each student knew his or her
part and when it was their turn to speak, so the overall preparedness of this
groupÕs presentation was well done and well planned out, and that made it
enjoyable to watch and easy to follow.
All of the groups that presented today did an excellent
job. The presentations were all put together so well, they were all creative
and were all very entertaining. However, Group 13Õs presentation stood out to
me. They had a fun, interactive presentation that the audience seemed to really
enjoy. Their goal was to figure out what happened in the end of the King Lear
play, and explain how everyone died. The group selected a great part from the
book to present on. It is a very memorable portion that the class could all
recall easily, and it gave them a lot of information to present on. They
achieved their goal very creatively and were able to grasp the audiences
attention. The group had great props, their powerpoint was a great assistant
for the information they were presenting. The groupÕs customs, such as the
handcuffs, were well put together, and helped get the point across that the
setting was in the San Luis Obispo Police Department. Their case files, and the
doughnuts were also a nice touch. The group did a great job incorporating the
audience in their presentation. Keeping the audience involved and asking them
questions, it helped keep the presentation interesting and made it so the
audience had to pay attention. The doughnuts were a good incentive for
answering a question, and went along great with the police department theme.
Overall, I thought the group presented their information with confidence, they
made good eye contact and had strong voices.
Group 13 was my favorite presentation and not just because
I got a free donut. The police drama style presentation did a great job of
creating a modern take on an old world classic. It was easily the most original
of the presentations taking almost no creative queues from the original story.
They developed their own idea and used it to envelope the most important
moments of the King Lear story. One of the highlights of the presentation was
the teamÕs incorporation of the audience into the skit. I experienced an extra
dimension of drama as I waited tenaciously for another opportunity to earn a
donut. When I first heard the mumbled statement regarding a ÒprizeÓ for
audience participation I thought surely it wouldnÕt be one of the delicious
treats in the pink box. To my surprise, after my tongue failed my in
remembering who stepped up to defeat the bastardly Edmund, the vigilant student
to my right was rewarded with a glazed circle of delight. I again missed my
second opportunity but on the final round succeeded in remembering how the
story concluded with Òeveryone diesÓ. After the presentation, Professor Marx
let us in on the inside joke about how the ending actually really had been
altered to a happier note for a period. Well played. I wish I could have
appreciated how clever that was during the presentation but I still think it
was pretty great even after the fact. To sum up, the presentation was superbly
performed and concisely brought together the last few moments of the play. I
couldnÕt have asked for a more interesting representation and summary of King
Lear. Case closed.
Group 14
Group 14 had a very interesting presentation where that did
the basic idea of comparing the reading to movie versions and other types of
adaptations of the reading but with this comparison to the Japanese movie Ran
was a very interesting twist. This was an interesting twist because; first off
it was a very obscure movie to even find IÕm sure, and second, the adaptation
had to deal with change in culture which seemed to have a big impact of the
movie. Each member found a part in the movie that correlated to the reading and
describe how the movie was different then the reading. I imagine this must have
been hard for them considering there were a lot of changes in the movie but the
group did well. I also think this must have been hard because the movie was 3
hours long so there was probably a lot going on that was filler that was
different than the reading that they also had to sort through. The parts they
pick to explain to the class were explained very well. Having to explain the
differences in the plot and explain how some characters were overlapped and
rolled into other characters showed that the group had thorough knowledge and
understating of the characters in the reading. To see King Leer be done in
another culture was very surprising and help show me how well done and
important this play is and will continue to be. With all this said I enjoyed
this presentation very much and the group did a good job.
I feel that all the presentations yesterday were all very
good. Unfortunately my favorite one was the movie one on Bacconis Idols, but
though I found it entirely entertaining seeing the examples they were providing
in TV for each of the Idols. It wasn't memorable in the way for me to give much
more feed back than 'it was super fun to watch', but did provide a variety of
clips to keep us entertained and provided a unique medium. The use of the clips
did give more insight into their interpretations of the idols as it may mean
for today's society, giving it more connection for the audience. In a close
second place slot, I think the Police Station Recap. The Police Station one had
a great form of recap of the last part of the play. With the lead student
acting as head of the investigation, and all of us as other members of the
police department in a debriefing format was very creative. Also the bribing of
donuts for correct information on witness statements was clever too. They
obviously spent a lot of time on their act, and it was good that they got the
audience involved with questions. All in all, I wish I wasn't so dawn to both
of these presentations, but I found all of them attention grabbing and very
amusing. They both covered the information from the readings very well.
The King Lear and Francis Bacon presentations were
especially well done but the presentation that I found most unique was that
done by Group 14. The presentation was a comparison between the Shakespeare
play King Lear and the Japanese movie ÒRanÓ. The movie ÒRanÓ was based
on the play King Lear only adapted to Japanese cinema. The group
discussed some primary differences between the two and discussed some of the
key differences in each of the five acts. The movie was based on the same time
period as King Lear only taking place in Medieval Japan. Because
Japanese women held very little political power at the time ÒRanÓ adapted the
characters of LearÕs three daughters to three brothers. The play also
eliminated the characters of Gloucester, Edgar, Oswald, Cornwall and Edmund,
their lines and actions being distributed between the other characters of the
play. The movie begins similar to that of the King Lear with a Japanese
lord attempting to distribute power between his three sons. One of the sons is
disowned by the lord while all the power and riches are split between the other
two. Over time the two sons put into power begin to pressure the lord into
losing more and more power. In act three the play and movie start to deviate
more rapidly. Instead of Lear disappearing into a fierce storm the lord is on
the losing end of a battle. ItÕs clear that the lord is losing his clarity and
then appears to venture off. Act four the missing characters of Cornwall,
Oswald, Edmund, Edgar, and Gloucester become more apparent as their lines are
taken by the main characters. One the key differences between. The betrayal
between Goneril and Regan is used as a subplot between the wives of the
brothers. Another key difference between the play and movie was that the Lord
had no obvious character transformation like that of Lear. Overall the group
was very informative in comparing play King Lear to the adapted Japanese
movie.
Group 15
Of the presentations on May 1, I felt that the Baconian
Idol project stood out the most. I felt that the presenters made their
video especially entertaining. It was interesting to see examples of the
different Baconian idols in the sitcom/television world. I thought this
was an extremely effective teaching method, but I felt that the text between
each scene, describing the idols could have been screened longer. I had
some difficulty reading the text as it was scrolling through so quickly. I
thought that because the shows that the group took the clips from were
extremely comedic and entertaining to begin with, the quality of their
presentation was very much enhanced, but I felt that some of the clips the
group chose were a bit forced with the matching idol quality. I thought
that some of the clips didnÕt match their corresponding idol as well as other
clips.
Of the groups that presented yesterday, two groups had
projects that impacted me. First, Group 15Õs project was one of the two that
had the most impact for me. When I read the essays written by Bacon, I had a
hard time understanding his four idols and what exactly he meant by them. When
Group 15 took the four idols and broke them up into categories each with pop
culture examples, I felt as though I fully understood what Bacon was saying. It
was also interesting to me that there seemed to be so many examples in our
culture to support what Bacon was saying. I feel as though that shows just how
relevant and important his ideals are still today, hundreds of years later. The
second project that had the most impact for me was Group 12Õs reenactment of
Act 1 Scene 1 in modern English. It really struck me when they were performing
just how foolish King LearÕs thought process and decisions were in the scene.
While I did catch on to the fact that he was not being rational when I was
reading, I feel as though it was magnified when they performed their
interpretation in modern English
Group 15's project was the most entertaining and meaningful
to me out of all the groups that presented on May 1st. Group 15 presented on
Francis Bacon's Novum Organum. I found
Novum Organum to be a little bit outdated in terms of language and
relatability. They used culture and modern interpretations from TV shows and
movies to relate this work to a modern audience. What I didn't like is that
they really didn't talk to us. There was no human feeling in the video, just
something they put together and let it roll. I really would have liked to see
it broken up into the four pieces and have them talk in between the sections.
Otherwise, the project was solid. All of the clips described the four idols in
very clear and simple terms. Here I would have liked to see the presenters
themselves introduce the idols and tell us what they are about, then play the
video clips to add the humor. The video clips were very well chosen and were
all culturally relevant, which many people could recognize and laugh along
with. Not the best project it could have been, but it was well done with a few
minor gripes.
The group presentation that had the most meaning to me was
the group that discussed Bacon's 4 idols. Being in a more scientifically based
major, I have a great appreciation for Bacon. I like how the group took a
rather abstract concept and made it relevant to a modern audience. It
was fun seeing shows that I watch in my spare time for fun relate to the more
technical part of my life. It actually got me thinking of examples of how these
four idols show up in my classwork. For the idol of the tribe, in several
lab classes the data didn't match the expected results. Instead of figuring out
why, there was this temptation to alter the experiment to get the 'right'
answer, regardless of the change's scientific relevance. We are so driven as a
society to be right, it can blind us from learning why things stray from the
right answer. For the idol of the theater, the aerospace industry is incredibly
stuck in tradition. If something worked before, it will continue to be done
that way for decades. It is considered too risky or expensive to try new
things. This is slowing the potential growth of one of the most high tech
industries. For the idol of the cave, in most of the group projects I've worked
on, conflict arises from differences of opinion. The progress of the project is
inhibited by people being unable to step away from their own mindset and see
value in other possible beliefs. For the idol of the marketplace, there is a
problem in acronyms. Even though there is an attempt to use simple language
overall, words get bunched together to form new words. This can get very
confusing as the same acronym can be used for several different parts of the
same system. In summation, Even though Bacon brought the idols to the attention
of everyone in the 17th century, it still hinders are development and
understanding nearly 400 years later.