English 230-02
Responses to Group
Presentations April 10 2012
Group 1
Pride, itÕs something that everybody has, and
something that we all have to deal with. Beowulf has more pride than most
and that has gotten him into hot water a time or two. This particular
presentation really caught my attention. It focused on a main point of
the story and that is battle, pride, and life or death. Throughout the
story Beowulf battles his way around Geatland leaving dismembered bodies of
enemies in his wake. I feel that Group 1 really demonstrated this well. They
brought up a topic that is not just a negative or positive attribute in the
story, but it is still a negative or positive attribute today. Pride makes
people do things that maybe they wouldnÕt ordinarily do. Beowulf battles
Grendel to help Hrothgar regain control of his city, but it also to give
himself that dose of adrenaline and self-confidence that he lives on. This
battle though inevitably leads to the death of Beowulf, the death of a few of
his soldiers, and the death of Grendel and his mother. BeowulfÕs pride leads
to and is the cause of most of, if not all of the deaths throughout the poem. If
Beowulf was not full of pride maybe he wouldnÕt have battled all the sea
monsters and maybe he wouldnÕt have died after his battle with the Dragon. But
if Beowulf didnÕt have his pride itÕs possible that he wouldnÕt have been the
great king that he was either. As Beowulf has shown, pride can kill you
or make you stronger; it just depends on how you use it.
The presentation that had the most meaning to me was
number one, BeowulfÕs Battles. The group made the story easy to
understand by providing a poster describing the pros and cons of each of his
battles. It was meaningful to me because of the layout and structure of
the presentation. Each display highlighted the person or creature Beowulf
was fighting, along with the worthy and ruthless parts of the encounter.
For example, one poster showed that he won the battle against Grendel, but that
angered his mother. This made Beowulf seem like he isnÕt better than the
monsters he was fighting. After each battle was presented the class
was able to participate in the presentation, which made it much more meaningful
to me. The group asked the class if we thought BeowulfÕs pride helped him
in the battle or not and gave us the chance to make a decision for ourselves.
I feel the group did a great job laying out the most important parts of the
Beowulf story, while allowing us to get involved as well. Part of
creating a demonstration that the audience is interested in is describing only
the most relevant information. The group clearly showed us that BeowulfÕs
pride hurt him in his battles against the GrendelÕs mother and the dragon.
It was most meaningful project for me because I was engaged the whole time and
I learned something. I also feel the project was successful because each
person presented something and no one person dominated the entire presentation.
The presentation that I found to be the most
meaningful was the first presentation, BeowulfÕs Battles. It was my favorite
because it was engaging and allowed for audience participation. Another reason
I liked this presentation was the fact that it focused on the question of
whether BeowulfÕs pride was an asset or a flaw. Most of the class seemed to
think the majority of the time his pride helped him. However, I felt that his
pride hurt him in most instances. The only time it came in handy was when he
fought Grendel. In this case his pride was a good thing because he saved lives.
In all the other battles (sea monsters, GrendelÕs mother, the dragon) he was
fighting just to fight. No one was in immediate danger, and ultimately his
desire to fight ended his life. For example, when Beowulf fought GrendelÕs
mother he did it for his pride. He wasnÕt protecting anyone. He pursued her.
Beowulf said, ÒSo arise, my lord, and let us immediately set forth on the trail
of this troll-dam. I guarantee you: she will not get away.Ó (line 1390-1392) In
other words, Beowulf was looking for a fight and putting himself, and others in
danger that could have possibly been completely avoided. I can relate
this to personal experiences where I have witnessed fights. Nine out of ten
times I have witnessed a fight it seemed to be for no reason. I have watched
people get hurt over pointless arguments just because they couldnÕt swallow
their pride. Therefore, I feel that BeowulfÕs pride was a flaw. If he hadnÕt
been so prideful he may not have died in a battle, and he might have lived
happily many more years.
In my opinion, Group 1Õs project was the most meaningful
and effective presentation on Tuesday. The group posed the question of whether
BeowulfÕs pride was an asset or a flaw when he battled monsters. I liked how
the group clearly detailed BeowulfÕs four fights with monsters and how they
posed pros and cons of each battleÕs outcomes. The presentation made me think
about the theme of pride, which I had not really done when I was reading the
poem. I liked how this group engaged the audience by posing the question of
whether the pros outweighed the cons or not. By making the audience vote on the
consequences of BeowulfÕs pride, it made the audience think more. I also liked
how this presentation expressed the consequences of each battle and showed how
each battle essentially led to the next. I also enjoyed this groupÕs visuals.
The handmade posters were a good visual aid and were an effective way of
conveying the information. Since Beowulf is written as an epic poem, it is
sometimes difficult to fully comprehend what is going on in each scene. This
group conveyed their information clearly and made it easier to better
understand each individual battle since it is somewhat difficult to understand
what is going on when reading the poem. By watching this groupÕs presentation,
I now better understand the consequences of BeowulfÕs pride and how it led to
his ultimate demise, since he was too proud to ask for help while battling the
dragon. Overall, this presentation was very insightful and helped me to better
understand BeowulfÕs fights against the four monsters.
I enjoyed hearing group 1Õs take on the issues
of Beowulf. They really highlighted the good and bad that came with his pride.
Growing up, one of the toughest issues of morality is drawing the line between
pride and arrogance. At what point does being proud of our abilities and
accomplishments become too much? BeowulfÕs confidence in his abilities helped
spread the word of his achievements. His subsequent fame lead to his
confrontation with Grendel in order to help HrothgarÕs kingdom as well as to
bring glory to Hygelac. By succeeding, with GrendelÕs arm to show for it, he
further solidified his position as a mighty warrior. Again, with GrendelÕs
mother, although his pride lead to the death of Aeschere (HrothgarÕs right hand
man), it also lead to the death of the mother. Once again, BeowulfÕs pride
ultimately lead to victory. Group 1Õs variety of posters clearly distinguished
the impacts from each case of BeowulfÕs pride. Throughout his life, his
confidence in his actions helped him move up the social ladder, eventually
becoming King of Geatland. The arrival of the dragon raises even more
questions, as addressed by Group 1. Was BeowulfÕs death unnecessary? Did his
pride finally lead to his demise? While the clear answer is ÒyesÓ, a part of
him must have been thinking about protecting his people. ÒI shall win the gold
by my courage, or else mortal combat, doom of battle, will bear your lord awayÓ.
Just like a captain goes down with the ship, Beowulf understood his duty as
King to shield his people and put his life at risk. Group 1 emphasized the
progression of BeowulfÕs pride and the associated pros and cons throughout his
journey. While his over confidence lead to decades of success, Beowulf
eventually reached his limit.
I appreciated the thoughtfulness Group 1 put into the
substance and delivery of their presentation. They carefully studied and
analyzed Beowulfs battles throughly enough to be able to weigh the pros and
cons of each battle. I felt that Group 1 went beyond having a basic
understanding of Beowulfs battles, and became immersed in what these trials and
tribulations really meant for the outcome of the poem as a whole, as well as
the individual characters. Group 1 did an excellent job of engaging the
rest of the class in the final analysis on Beowulfs battles. Their method of
reviewing all the pros and cons involved with each battle, then reciting key
quotes from the poem before having the class vote was very effective. It
allowed us to think about these battles much more critically than we had
before. In addition to the quality in substance, and involvement with the
class, I enjoyed that each participant created their own display board which
reflected their individual artistic style. I think that if all of the boards
had a uniform look, the presentation would lose some of the distinctiveness
between battles that I feel is important. I think that I gained the most
from Group 1Õs presentation. While the others were definitely entertaining in
their own right, I feel that Group 1 really made a valiant effort to increase
the classes understanding and appreciation of Beowulf, as well as get us to
think about it in a different light. I feel that they succeeded in doing this.
Of yesterdayÕs group presentations, group 1 stood out
the most in my mind. I really enjoyed reading Beowulf and of his many battles
and triumphs. The group captured the importance of the four various battles
Beowulf fought in his lifetime; against the sea monsters, Grendel, GrendelÕs
mother, and the dragon. But the group analyzed the battles with an interesting
approach. Was Beowulf truly being noble and just in his battles? Or was his
fighting more for selfish reasons, for glory and gold? In our class discussion
we focused more on the rise and fall of Beowulf and didnÕt really touch on his
true motives and intentions in the battles. The group did an excellent job
presenting the pros and cons to each battle. Some of their main points I hadnÕt
even considered, such that fighting the dragon alone wasnÕt necessary as he had
his whole army along with him, and fighting the battle alone was a little
selfish of Beowulf as he would be leaving behind his people, potentially
putting them all in danger. Their boards were eye catching and creative.
Lastly, their idea to include the whole class in voting on each battle kept my
attention and interest. Overall, it was a great presentation.
My favorite presentation from today was from group 1.
I thought it was a very interesting angle to take by analyzing Beowulf's
pride factor in each of his battles. Before this presentation, I didn't
really consider how his pride really influenced his reason for each of his
battles in the story. For example, one presenter mentioned how he could
have had a whole fleet of his soldiers by his side when fighting the dragon,
however he opted to fight the dragon without them. By analyzing the pros
and cons of his actions in each battle, it gave us really good insight to his
character. In the case of the dragon, the pros were saving the country as
well as more treasure; however the cons included his unnecessary death and
consequently leaving the Geatland in a vulnerable place. In this
particular case, I felt that Beowulf's pride hurt him, and I really enjoyed the
extra level of interaction in the presentation where we got to express our
specific feelings by voting. the presentation was very easy to understand
since it was so simple, yet it was still quite informative. Simply by
discussing the four battles (Sea Monster, Grendel, Grendel's Mother, and the
Dragon), the group really taught the class a lot while maintaining our
interest. I feel that all four presenters did an excellent job
presenting, and their visual aids were all great (despite being quite
different). Beowulf's pride was perhaps his biggest flaw, and group 1 did
an excellent job illustrating that point.
Overall, I feel I learned the most from the BeowulfÕs
Battles presentation. The variety of posters kept it not only interesting
but easy to follow. The presentation started out with a drawing showing
Beowulf in his swim race against Brecca. The speaker was able to
incorporate a dialogue from the reading then showed how it was being portrayed
in his drawing. The next poster reflected the pros and cons of Beowulf
attacking the vicious monster Grendal. Although heroic, Beowulf was
forced to deal with many issues following the battle that would ultimately end
up leading to his death. The next poster had 6 descriptions of Beowulf
followed by dialogues and interpretations. BeowulfÕs popularity by this
point has skyrocketed. He has proved himself in battle, proved himself a
leader, brought peace to HrothgarÕs Kingdom, was the savior to the kingdom and
has more gold than he know what to do with. By this point, it was
apparent that BeowulfÕs pride was negatively impacting not only his character
but also his decision making. The last poster depicted BeowulfÕs fight
against GrendalÕs mother. This ultimately ended up resulting in the death
of Beowulf. After the speaker was done presenting, they asked one more
time, did BeowulfÕs pride harm him? Every single person in the class
raised their hands. Although confidence is the key to success considering
one must believe in themselves first before they can achieve their goal, their
comes a point to where this confidence turns into cockiness which could be very
detrimental to a persons character. For Beowulf, this cockiness led him
straight to his very own death. The group was able to harness and depict
BeowulfÕs battles in such a way that was both structured and easy to comprehend.
Great Presentation.I felt that Group 1 was the most meaningful
presentation of the first batch of projects. They clearly addressed one of the
main moral/theme of the Beowulf epic by analyzing Beowulf's
pride. Instead of just conveying information about the characters or plot of
the story, they allowed the audience to interpret certain aspects of the text.
The input of the audience encouraged us to listen to their arguments
and actually think critically about the text. The hand drawings displayed on the
poster boards clearly required significantly more skill and care than
borrowing images off of the internet for a power point presentation.
Group 2 had the most enjoyable presentation. There initial concept and
execution were very humorous and well thought out. As a member of the
audience, I was amazed at how I was learning about certain aspects of Beowulf's
tale while being entertained simultaneously. The aspects of Beowulf's approach
to politics required plenty of creativity and knowledge of the text, and group
2 succeeded at presenting those qualities. The only aspect of the
presentation that could have made this presentation better would have been if
they actually opened up the floor for questions. To do so, would have been
rather difficult, but I would have been incredibly impressed if the group could
actually improvise and respond on Beowulf's position on a random topic in
politics. Overall though, group 2 had a solid presentation.
Group 1 presented a take on Beowulf in offering
opinions about his pride- which in many cases was more hubris- and the quick
polls of the class provided some results I found to be interesting when
comparing this character trait to similar protagonists in modern media. For the
majority of his battles, the overwhelming majority of the class found his pride
to be an asset- most especially in the fight against Grendel. It's interesting
to consider hubris as an asset to a character when it is so often displayed
prominently as a negative trait- modern books and movies featuring superhero-type
characters often go to great lengths to show that the protagonist is a humble
yet powerful character, whereas the antagonist is most often a character of
similar power but with overwhelming pride and arrogance, not unlike Beowulf. It
seems likely that these characters in modern movies are easier for the audience
to identify with, as humility is seen as virtuous. As group 4 showed with their
comparison with Beowulf in the poem against Beowulf in the movies, it is clear
that the writers behind the modern update felt that even Beowulf needed a touch
of humility and moral dilemma(the love triangle with Grendel, Beowulf, and the
witch) in order to be more palatable to today's audiences. But the class's
response to Beowulf and not seeing his pride as a detriment stands in stark
contrast to modern protagonists. This leads me to believe that perhaps there is
some room in modern storytelling for a main character of uncompromising pride
such as Beowulf that the audience can still get behind. Rather than the
archetype of the humble hero that characters today are molded to be, people
might like to see that prideful and arrogant Beowulf.
Although project number two was very creative and
entertaining, I liked how group number one chose to dig deeper into the story. Through
this presentation, I was able to link the story of Beowolf to real life
situations. For Beowolf along with anyone else in this world, pride is
valuable but must be kept in check. Giving pros and cons about each
battle and their outcomes, I was able to think deeper into the story than when
I originally read it. My opinion on Beowolf changed after hearing this
presentation, and I realized that his motivations were more about his
reputation and fame instead of protection and justice. Yes, he was a
great warrior but he was not able to keep his ego in check so he learned the
hard way that no man is invincible. Although this story is outdated, the
concepts and lessons can still translate to be relevant in todays world. I
really enjoyed this presentation and am happy that I was able to gain a new
perspective on the story of Beowolf.
Group one had a very creative way of presenting their
project as well as a very good presentation idea. Identifying BeowulfÕs
character traits, specifically pride, and trying to analyze if his pride was
more of a flaw or a helpful trait. This was a very insightful way to look at
things. The way the group handled trying to identify the trait was great
because they didnÕt present a one sided argument but presented both sides of
the argument in four different scenarios, being the four main battles, and then
let the audience decide whether or not the his pride helped or hurt him in the
long run. Getting the audience involved is always a very good idea
because it helps keep their attention and more engage. I know that I was paying
more attention to the group and it had me thinking more about BeowulfÕs pride
than before. This presentation helped me look at the book in a different
manner. To help argue both of these sides the read out loud direct quotes from
the epic to help bring into light the different points to be made. This showed
that they actually took the time to read and fully analyze the trait and bring
forth the excerpts that would best help the audience decide. Another great
thing about the project was their posters. Each group member had their own self
drawn poster which helps present both sides of pride for each battle. This
helped the audience better see both arguments in a more organized manner. The
project had a good idea, good format, kept the audience involved and most
important they made the point very clear.
I was very impressed with the first round of
presentations on April 10, 2012. I could tell all of the groups put a lot
of effort into their presentations. Out of all of the groups that
presented during the first round of presentations I found group 1Õs
presentation to be the most meaningful in relation to the actual poem. I
was interested in their analysis of the pros and cons of BeowulfÕs different battles.
I felt that this was the most crucial aspect of the poem. I feel this way
because the battles in Beowulf are the main elements of the poem. By
approaching the pros and the cons of the battles, group 1 did an excellent job
in summarizing the majority of the book as well as most of the key elements.
For Example, Justin was the first to present his battle, the battle between
Beowulf and the sea monster. His example of pros were the fact that
Beowulf won and was able to brag about this victory later on and the fact that
this made trade safe. JustinÕs examples of cons were the fact that
Beowulf lost the swimming race and that he almost died. In describing
battles in this manner Justin clearly communicates the result of the battle and
the resulting factors of the battle. To sum up their understanding of the
pros and the cons, the class was asked to vote on whether or not the battle was
a positive or a negative. This was another good idea because it forced the
listeners to weigh the positives against the negatives. Overall this was
an excellent presentation. Thanks.
I enjoyed listening to Group OneÕs presentation. The
overall setup of the project was very well done. I liked how they
described each of BeowulfÕs battles and then discussed the pros and cons of his
use of pride. This helped refresh the audienceÕs memory but also got them
thinking about new aspects of the story. It was very fitting that each
person described one of the battles and that they were in sequential order. Each
person seemed well prepared and confident in his or her presentation. I also
liked how each person created their own poster. If there were only one
poster, it would be hard to see and understand. The individual posters
were also a nice effect because the audience got to see each presenterÕs style
and contribution to the project. A lot of people tend to use PowerPoint
presentations, but sometimes these take away from the actual people talking. Using
posters was a nice way to deviate from the norm of presenting. One of the
speakers held his poster in front of himself while talking. I thought
that this was very effective because he could easily point to parts of the
poster and keep the audience focused on him. I also enjoyed the voting
aspect of the presentation. This helped draw in the audience and keep
them engaged. The only thing that was missing from the voting portion was
some sort of conclusion; it would have been nice for the group to summarize the
voting in some way. Overall I think Group One did a very nice job.
After watching the presentations on Tuesday, April
11, I thought that the first presentation was most relatable to the book. I
enjoyed how the group made posters because I am a very visual person. Also, I
like how they used a compare/contrast method to recap the story. I was able to
remember a lot about the book based off of the posters with drawings and
descriptions. Although this presentation was more physically displayed, I
thought presentation number two had the greatest in-depth analysis and creativity.
I enjoyed how the whole presentation didnÕt simply revolve around the pros and
cons but took a look at many aspects or themes within Beowulf and described
their opinions from there. I really enjoyed how this group brought the themes
seen in the story and converted them into modern-day issues. It was clever and
the speeches were appropriate for both the class level and relating to the
readings. It was truly a presentation and I was entertained the whole time,
wondering what each character would say next. The other presentations were good
compared to this great, original and enthusiastic presentation. The other
presentations did not receive such a high praise from me because, although they
were very informational, the Beowulf 2012 presentation integrated old-fashion
character portrayals with current issues such as economics, foreign policy, and
social issues (like abortion). Overall, I believe all of the presentations were
entertaining and I am glad there were various forms of presenting for group projects
for the class to see.
My favorite presentation was done by group 1, which
was titled BeowulfÕs Battles. I found this presentation to be very meaningful
and a very good portrayal of BeowulfÕs four distinct battles. I really liked
how there were individual poster boards identifying both the pros and the cons
for each battle. The pros and cons really helped me to get a visual of all the
elements that went into the battles. The presentation tied together very well
by attempting to answer the universal question of whether BeowulfÕs pride
helped him or hindered him, in relation to each individual battle. I definitely
agreed with the classÕs first answer that in the battle between Beowulf and the
sea monsters, BeowulfÕs pride helped him. I liked how the group identified this
fight as not specifically necessary, but more so a foundation for BeowulfÕs
character to be built off of. I also agreed with the class in regards to the
second battle between Beowulf and Grendel, in that BeowulfÕs pride helped him
here to defeat the monster and provide safety for the town. The class vote
ended in a tie for the third battle, which was between Beowulf and GrendelÕs
mother, which I do think supports the pros and cons given by the group. Lastly
was the battle between Beowulf and the Dragon. The class found BeowulfÕs pride
to have hurt him in this battle for it was not essential that he fight alone,
and it ultimately led to his death. Overall I really enjoyed this presentation
and I especially liked how it revolved around the central theme of BeowulfÕs
pride.
Group 2
I was not sure what to expect from the first day of
projects on April 10, 2012. I figured most of them would be just analyzing
Beowulf or The Miller and would be straightforward and maybe a little dull. I
was very surprised though all of the groups did a great job of doing more than
just a required project they actually got into it. However I would have to say
my favorite group was group 2 and their skit of Beowulf 2012. It was very
comical and I was not expecting that, it took me by surprise. You could tell
they put a lot of effort and thought into their story. The jokes were excellent
tying modern day problems to the way Beowulf would have handled it. It was also
very clever how they had one person from their group act as a audience member
and ask questions. They captured the essence of Beowulf perfectly when they
said something along the lines of if anyone is foolish enough to make enemies
of Beowulf will be dispatched quickly and mercilessly. That is Beowulf summed up
in one line. If you cross him he will destroy you. My favorite joke was
when the girl playing the audience member asked, ÒSo how would Beowulf handle
womenÕs rightsÓ and they responded in unison next question. Group 2 and all the
other groups that presented as well have set the bar high for groups following
them.
The Group that had the biggest impact on me was Group
2. Their presentation on Beowulf 2012 was full of enthusiasm, humor, and wit. I
found that the speakers all did a great job of presenting the material clearly.
It was evident that they had put in time in effort into practicing and creating
a skit that would be funny and interesting for the audience. The reason
why this presentation was the most meaningful to me was that they turned an
ancient epic into a skit that was relatable to present time. Their portrayal of
Beowulf as a political candidate took details from the novel (l like BeowulfÕs
personality and the historical context of the story) and turned them into a
platform for a campaign. Beowulf made for an interesting candidate. The pro of
his platform was that he was a war hero with a fierce determination that would
be good in situations of war. The cons to him being a candidate were that he
seemed less progressive and more old-fashioned in his views of social issues
(particularly womenÕs rights). I felt that this was relevant to this period in
time as we are going though the prelims of the presidential campaign. The
presentation helped to remind me that I should not take presidential campaigns
and politics too seriously.
The second group definitely stood out out of the
four presentations of the day. They presented their ideas in a more modern and
understandable way. They incorporated Beowulf's characteristics and story very
well. The presidential candidate approach was very easy to understand because
not only was it refreshing but it was also informative. The comedic way that
they presented his pride and his ideals about women and everyday life
represented Beowulf correctly. They represented his attitude towards war very
well in the way that he uses absolute strength to control others. They also
showed his attitude towards home life when they showed his plan to train to
mothers to serve their husbands and stay at home. They also showed
the way in which he wants to raise kids with his plan to start training kids at
a young age so that they stay healthy and they can always defend themselves.
The first group was also very informative. They stuck to the standard
presentation outlines but it worked for them. It was easy to follow and to see
the pros and cons of all of the battles that Beowulf has had. It was clear that
his pride helped him to come out of battles the victor. The group also
showed how he was fair in the way that he fought especially when he he would
handicap himself so that the fight was fair. The voting in between the
info session about the battles helped with the interactive part of the
presentation and kept the audience in the presentation.
I really liked all of the group presentations that
were given today but probably my favorite was the second one because of their
interesting opening that really got my attention and the humor that they
included throughout the presentation. Something that we as young voters may
beginning to think about is paying attention to political figures and issues. I
myself have been trying to keep up with whats happening with the rest of the
world especially with politics. That being said, I appreciated this group
taking the idea of the impending election, and putting a twist on it to apply
it to Beowulf by making it ÒBeowulf 2012Ó. The portrayal of BeowulfÕs
characteristics from a political standpoint was a very effective way of
presenting the information. I hadnÕt thought too much about his superhuman qualities
including his greater than human strength and overall macho attitude. The group
then transitioned quickly into the next subject of the women that are in
Beowulf. They cleverly skipped to the subject without spending too much tim eon
it because of how the book portrays women. Most women in the book remain
nameless, or are referred to as someoneÕs husband which is something the
presentation group was also able to poke fun at. Both the views of Beowulf and
the views abou women are extremely different from those that are shared by
people today and the group did a great job presenting the information in a
comical way that clearly and accurately conveyed the information.
In my opinion, the first four groups were excellent.
They all were very informative and interesting to listen to. Group 1 had great
visuals, Group 3 was unique, and Group 4 was very informative. However, the
group that struck me the most was Group 2: Beowulf 2012. This group described
what the world would be like with Beowulf elected president. Right from the
beginning I was surprised by the humor and I immediately became intrigued. As
soon as the introduction began, all of my attention was on them. This
presentation was extremely creative and very humorous. All of the members of
the group contributed equally and were all very funny. They went over all of
the current issues affecting todayÕs economy but if Beowulf was in charge.
Having Unferth in the audience was a great touch. Unferth asked creative
questions relating to healthcare, weapons, senior citizens, abortion,
immigration etc... The other three members of the group had quick answers and
visuals that made the audience laugh. They did their best to convince Unferth
that Beowulf would be the best candidate. I really liked how this group juxtaposed
todayÕs society with what society would be like if Beowulf was in charge. This
group was so successful because they made their topic relevant to everyone;
therefore, everyone was engaged and interested in what they had to say. This
group worked very well together. It is very clear that all of the members of
Group 2 spent sufficient time preparing for their presentation.
The 2nd presentation was by far the most engaging and
meaningful to my life. With elections coming up it was a great way to
show Beowulf's ideals in a humorous light. The first area that they went
over was economics as they mentioned the trickle down economy. This was a
very humorous and creative way to make note of his treasure and him giving it
back to everyone. The next area of information was about what sort of
education system Beowulf would impose. They were able to talk about how
kids were too coddled these days and needed fighting education. The group
also humorously portrayed Beowulf's view on women saying they would be taught
cooking, cleaning, and listening. They went on to address foreign policy
where he would just destroy all foes with his bare hands. Taxes wouldn't
be needed because you serve. Arms regulation was addressed as there being no
need for any. A heated debate among presidential candidates is health
care and they did a good job at showing that God would just decide on that
issue. Abortion was placed on the screen and then a line split right
threw it showing that abortion wasn't going to be talked about. The
immigrants issue is solved in the land of Beowulf considering if you can fight,
then you can be a member of the nation. It was very powerful to analyze
the book and then see a group show how Beowulf would be viewed in modern
America. Very creative, very well done!
The most meaningful project to me was from group #2. By
suggesting Beowulf as a candidate for president, the audience was able to
clearly see the vast differences between our social norms today and those of
BeowulfÕs time. Because the social norms are so different, it was very
comical to watch them present BeowulfÕs ideas of how our country should be
governed. It was clear to see that almost none of his solutions are
feasible. One of the biggest differences between our societal norms and
theirs is how women are treated. When the topic of womenÕs rights,
abortion and girlÕs education were brought up, we could see how little they
meant to Beowulf. Gender roles were completely defined and set in stone
and therefore not an issue to him. By comparing our current leader with
Beowulf, it was clear to see that our government is much more involved in our
lives. The contrast between BeowulfÕs solutions and our current
government is laughable, this presentation really showed how different we live
our lives today compared to those of BeowulfÕs time. This groups performance
clearly demonstrated BeowulfÕs character as a strong and manly warrior full of
courage and honor. The character was well represented in the presentation
the same way he was represented in the poem. His solution to most
of the campaign issues were similar to his solution to the problems of his
world, which was to be courageous and fight until victory and believe that his
fate has already been decided by god.
The presentation that stuck out most to me was group
number two: Beowulf 2012. I give this group credit for not only raw creativity
but also contextual pertinence. This group of students was able to take a
current event: the 2012 presidential election, and blend it with a course
assignment in such a smooth way that it was enjoyable to the class. While
watching this presentation, I was impressed with the way the group incorporated
legitimate election questions for BeowulfÕs representatives, such as womenÕs
rights, immigration, and poverty; yet they were answered in a comedic but
accurate manner according to the book. The group kept the classÕs
attention, which is very hard to do in a lecture hall. Additionally, the media
that this group used was another successful way to maintain the classÕs
interest. The pictures and superimposed images were very funny, which
made people want to keep watching to see what the group would do next. I
must say that this group did not cease to deliver new and exciting twists to
their original idea. My personal favorite was BeowulfÕs campaign slogan ÒFor
a Geater Tomorrow.Ó I found this hilarious, but I am also a sucker for puns.
Second favorite part was BeowulfÕs birth certificate – clever! Overall, I
thought that all groups did a great job, it would be a daunting task to have to
go first, so I give them all credit for being organized and on top of things
enough to do so.
I enjoyed all of the presentations completed on
Tuesday but I thought
group 2 had the best and most meaningful
presentation. I was
impressed by the creativity this group displayed by
choosing to
compare Beowulf to current political candidates. My
favorite part of
the presentation was that the group was really able
to portray the
character of Beowulf while putting him in a modern
day situation.
After listening to this presentation, I found myself
thinking of what
our nation would be like if we had a leader as
powerful as Beowulf.
After the way this group presented Beowulf as such a
strong leader, I
think it would be a great idea to vote for him and
put him in charge
of our nation. Another part of the presentation
I liked was the
groupÕs ability to include humor while still
successfully portray the
character of Beowulf. It was very interesting
to hear the humorous
references to current events while talking about a
character developed
so many years ago. I found it funny when the
group talk about the
ÒmediocrityÓ the United States has had to endure for
the last 4 years
with Barack Obama as the president. The last
reason this presentation
was the most meaningful to me was it allowed me to
picture Beowulf as
a ruler. In the poem, Beowulf is portrayed as a
very successful and
powerful warrior but his time of rule is essentially
skipped over.
Overall, I really enjoyed the presentation completed
by group 2
because it described Beowulf accurately while
incorporating humor to
keep me involved.
The cleverest presentation was Beowulf 2012: ÒAmericans
for a Geater Tomorrow.Ó They related modern day hot topics to Beowulf and his
reactions to them. They talked about his stance on foreign affairs, economics,
physical education, abortion, womenÕs rights, senior citizens, and immigration.
IÕm a strong believer in the past holds the information for our future. It is
obvious that Beowulf was a strong leader with many traits we could learn from,
though his stance on controversial topics may not be relevant to our modern
society. One of my favorite components of their presentation was the language
used; especially the rhythm. It emulated the style used in the story, which
made their presentation even more intriguing. Their introduction worked
precisely as it was supposed to, hooking the audience in with some
controversial statements about the presidency and the candidates that caused a
little buzz in the classroom. Overall their project was creative, unique, and
attention grabbing; precisely what a presentation should be.
I thought that all of the groups today were great in
their own creative ways. The most entertaining and creative group in my
opinion was Group 2: Beowulf 2012. They blended Beowulf's heroic aspects
into a political election format which I never would have thought of doing. The
central aspects were Beowulf's accomplishments and his elite status as a leader
but included into the discussion were also the religion, culture, and status of
women during the story's setting. Integrating the story of Beowulf with
politics and social views of the time helped to broaden this presentation and
provide an overall view of the story since Beowulf is not the only character. Although
the group's views were biased in praising Beowulf, they definitely supported
Beowulf's greatness with information from other parts of the story.
I thought the presentation by the group by Beowulf
2012 was both very interesting and original. I appreciated the humor and
cleverness the group used throughout the entire presentation. The presentation
was comical because of how they described BeowulfÕs actions would be if he was
president accompanied with hilarious slides. The group applied the leadership
qualities of Beowulf to those that AmericanÕs look for in a president. Beowulf
would be able to address the economy, the educational system, foreign policy,
taxation, healthcare, immigration and all other issues that would arise when
one is the leader of a country. The presentation was also good because the
group was able to use quotes from the poem to back up their claims about how
Beowulf would handle each issue if he were president.IÕve always wondered what
it would be like to have a ÒheroÓ run our country, instead of one of our
typical presidential candidates. This presentation gave some good
examples of how Beowulf might run America, and I couldnÕt help but wonder how
things might be if he was in charge. This is the main reason why I enjoyed this
presentation, but the humor and comical delivery also added a lot to the
overall presentation.
While all the groups had unique and interesting
presentations, I found Group 2 to have the most original delivery. Their fake
campaign, ÒBeowulf 2012,Ó was a captivating way to interpret and apply the
pride Beowulf championed throughout the epic poem. It was creative to include
actual issues from the upcoming election and answer them according to the time
period of Beowulf. Additionally, the project further examined the purpose of
the presentation from Group 1: how far Beowulf could extend his pride before it
began to hurt him. He had two roles in the poem: first a warrior, then a king.
Because Beowulf began as a great, courageous warrior, he needed to be prideful
in order to succeed in his many battles. However, when he became king, he
needed to contemplate the welfare of his people over the desire for yet another
glorious conquest. Thus, despite the comedy of Group 2Õs campaign, Beowulf for
President would perhaps not result in the best leadership. He would definitely
be revered, respected, and highly depended upon, but at a certain threshold I
believe his pride would yet again take over his duties as a unifying leader.
Thus, he would lead himself into obtaining personal glory while leaving America
without a leader (if it were the case for him to be killed in battle). In order
for him to succeed in office, he would need to be more diplomatic in nature and
less apt to resort to violence and warfare to prove his worth. If Beowulf were
to demonstrate such ability, then the campaign ÒBeowulf 2012Ó would undoubtedly
be a success.
The presentation of Beowulf 2012 was thoroughly
enjoyable. The comedy was hilarious, and it was impressive how well the
presentors were able to find quotes with such close
relevance to the numerous political issues of today. While i feel that their
portrayal of the candidate was very close to the way
he is, it seems that he is a little extreme on the issues. Despite this though,
I do feel like he would provide a fresh new start to
the way our country runs by doing things the way he wants, actually acting on
his beliefs and not trying to please everyone and
getting nothing accomplished because of it. I feel that Beowulf would single
handedly
slay more beasts, conquer more territory, and bring
our economy out of debt more-so than the last dozen presidents preceding him
combined in his first term in office. Despite
the stances of his on a few issues that I do not agree with, I am
convinced that he
could be a welcome change for our country. Should
he show up on this upcoming ballot, I will be sure to cast a vote
his way.
Although I would definitely feel a little
different if I were female...
Although I enjoyed presentations one, three,
and four yesterday, the one that suck with me the most was group number twoÕs
presentation, Beowulf 2012. I liked their presentation the most because
it was entertaining and they were upbeat when they talked. I like how
their group had one member ask questions from the audience because she asked
questions that further allowed them to explain why Beowulf makes such a good
leader. I also thought it was clever how they had one person in their
group mediate the election campaign and the other two members speaking on
behalf of Beowulf and what he stands for. I really liked that they
presented like it was an election because it was creative and allowed us to see
BeowulfÕs strengths as a leader and the weaknesses of the time he lived in,
like how women did not have much of a say in anything that the men did. Their
groupÕs introduction and conclusion captured my attention and kept me
interested all the way through the presentation and it tied everything nicely
together from beginning to end. I also enjoyed their PowerPoint because
they put pictures to what they were explaining, like training young boys to
fight and how Beowulf would accept anyone into their community if they were
willing to fight and support their land. The pictures were funny and added
an element to the presentation that kept it fun and lively. Even though
it was humorous, it still was a very informative presentation and presented a
lot of interesting information to the class.Given that the first groups had no
precedent on which to base their presentations, I believe that all of them did
an admirable job. The group that stood out the most to me was Group 2.
They were highly creative in their concept. Their choice to spoof Beowulf really
elevated their presentation. Although parts of their presentation were
slightly offensive, it was all in good fun and IÕll admit that I laughed quite
a bit. Their ability to take a millennia old story and apply it to modern
times showed their creativity and their ability to think outside of the box.
They all spoke clearly and loudly and it was obvious that they had prepared
their presentation before hand because everything was precisely on cue. I
was thoroughly surprised when I realized that they had utilized one of their
group members as a functioning member of the audience in order to further their
presentation and add a certain participatory aspect to it. After their
presentation, I will definitely be voting for Beowulf in 2012, who else could
lead this country out of these economic doldrums and toward Geatness?
Actually I would probably vote for Gandalf as President, Beowulf would be my
choice for Secretary of State. The only problem I had with their
presentation was that it did not fully demonstrate their understanding of the
text. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed Group 2Õs presentation; it was well
prepared, well executed and funny.
I thought that out of all the groups that presented
in class today, one in particular stood out. This group's project was engaging,
humorous, and was overall well presented. Group Two, the Beowulf for President
group had a very meaningful and creative idea. They injected humorous anecdotes
into each of their dialogues, keeping the audience engaged and laughing, while
still presenting the relevant information on Beowulf. They seemed to have
genuinely enjoyed making presenting their project, which made the audience
enjoy it. Many times, projects can be boring and simply spit out facts. But
Group Two took a creative and unique approach and it showed. It was fun to see
what they thought Beowulf's presidency would be like. But not only was it fun,
I think it accurately described Beowulf's traits. Comparing Beowulf to today's
leaders there are stark differences and it made for an enjoyable comparison. I
also appreciated how the group incorporated contemporary topics such as the War
in Afghanistan and health care reform into their presentation; it made for an
interesting project. The visual aids that were used were appealing and
engaging, providing the another level of enjoyment and satire. Furthermore, the
project on the whole can be looked at as a sort of satirical look at modern
society. The group tries to persuade us that Beowulf, a barbaric and relatively
uncivilized man when compared to today's standards, is a more fit leader than
Obama or any of the Republican candidates. From the audience's perspective, you
could tell that this group definitely had practiced their speech multiple times
because they transitioned perfectly from one slide and one topic to the next
while still keeping comedic timing and without stuttering or awkward pauses.
The project that was most meaningful to me was the
project done by group 2, or as they call themselves, ÒBeowulf 2012.Ó I loved
the way that they made the project interesting and funny because it was
interesting to listen to and I was interested in what they were going to say
next. While it was funny, they still kept the facts straight. First they
opened with a speech about the upcoming presidential election which immediately
caught my attention about what they were going to do. Then they introduced
their Òelection planÓ and discussed foreign policy, education, and money. When
they did each of these they brought up examples from the real story. They said
that they Beowulf would defend our nation, provide the people with all the
money he earned, and that all the men should be trained in physical combat and
the women should be educated in cooking, cleaning, and raising a child.After
they went through the initial speeches, they asked the audience if they had any
questions. They planted someone in the audience that kept asking different
questions. Some of the questions that were brought up were healthcare, arms
regulation, and taxes. Once again they used examples from the story that
actually would apply to the questions if it were a real election. The
powerpoint was my favorite part of the presentation because they had mostly
pictures. If you put too much text on a power point it distracts from the
speaker (which they didnÕt) and the pictures were funny and tastefully done but
not distracting.
The presentation that I enjoyed the most was group
2's presentation, "Beowulf 2012." Their presentation was very
effective at grabbing the attention of the audience, because it was on a topic
that very much relates to what is going on now in America. By poking fun at the
issue of the upcoming presidential election, they got the whole class laughing.
They summed up Beowulf's traits from a political standpoint, and this was a
good way of letting humor into the presentation, while also accurately
portraying his over the top characteristics. When the presentation got around
to the issue of women's rights, the group made a joke by saying "Next
question," but this attitude very well reflects the way the epic regards
its female characters. Females in "Beowulf" were not given names, and
were always referred to as side characters in the story, with the exception of
the importance of Grendel's mother. This presentation made me realize just how
extreme some of Beowulf's characteristics are. He possesses superhuman-like
traits, and holds values that are vastly different from those that our modern
society holds. The clashing of these two completely different societies is what
made the presentation so funny. There was one point when the group took on the
issue of immigration, and posted a picture of an immigrant farming family on
the slide. They then edited the picture so that each of the family members
wielded a sword, and said "if they can fight, they are welcome."
Overall, I thought group 2 had the most engaging and well rounded presentation.
The presentation that I found most meaningful was the
second performance (Group 2), which connected the upcoming political election
in the United States to the leader of the epic poem of Beowulf. Although
performed in a comic manner, the performance effectively related the
characteristics/policies of the leaders of today (in the United States) and the
the characteristics/policies of leaders of the Middle Ages. As one should
expect, the specific policies of today are very much different from the
policies of the Middle Ages, yet the performance was able to categorize their
candidate's (Beowulf) policies under political issues facing the United States
presidential candidates of today. For example, whereas today's policies
concerning education are focused on funding public education (economic
concerns), Beowulf's policy on education, as the performance presented it, was
focused on raising your kids to be physically strong and capable of going into
battle with the greatest chance to win. Furthermore, one can see that the goals
of both the policies were to provide the best opportunity for the youth of
their state to succeed. In this sense, the performance showed that the politics
of both time periods focused on attaining the same goals. Among many other
general political issues that the performance brought, the issues of foreign
policy, economic policy, and immigration were highlighted and shown to have
similar goals to the current policies today in the United States.
Although the performance came off as comedic, the similarities between the two
periods of time in history are uncanny. The parts of their performance that the
audience laughed at concerned topics that we, ironically, take very seriously
today
I thought that the presentation done by Group #2 was
very creative and very well put together. It explained many of the main ideas
and events of the story of Beowulf in an applicable context to current events.
I thought the explanation of Beowulf's would-be foreign policy was especially
well done, citing specific references to the battles that he fought and won.
Mostly, I liked how the group discussed the social structure and prevailing
cultural beliefs of the time during which the story was written, which is just
as important to understanding Beowulf as the story itself. In this sense, this
project was the most unique of all of those presented because it focused on the
bigger historical picture rather than just on the literature itself. The presenters
then went one step further in comparing some of these cultural issues to those
that are currently being faced in modern times. For example, the lack of womenÕs
rights in BeowulfÕs time was a key issue that the presenters illuminated in a
clever and humorous way, and then related this to the issue of abortion, which
is a source of conflict and much debate in todayÕs world. Rule by warlords and
the emphasis on war that was important in the culture of this time was also
highlighted in a very clever way, by describing how education would function in
a society with Beowulf as its ruler. All in all, I thought this presentation
was the most engaging as well as the most creative and well-organized. It
was obvious that a lot of work and collaboration was put into this
presentation, so great job overall!
My favorite presentation on Tuesday April 10th was
the group Beowulf 2012, group 2. This presentation was most meaningful to me
for a number of reasons. First of all, it was very creative. When hearing the
title, ÒBeowulf 2012Ó, I immediately thought it was a modern take on Beowulf.
Although it was just that, it wasnÕt what I had originally expected so I was
surprised. Also, I really enjoyed how the group juxtaposed the humor with the
accurate information on the ideals of Beowulf. It was done in a way that made
it very funny to the audience, however it was still correct information. It
also was funny because it showed the differences between the era Beowulf ruled
in to the era the president rules in now. It was amusing again, but also
interesting to have such medieval concepts compared to now. The overall idea,
using the presidential election, was very well thought out and perfect timing
with the election coming up. My
favorite portion of the presentation was when they asked for questions and
their fourth group member pretended to be Unferth. That was a perfect
connection to Beowulf that I was not expecting. The war like and dark ideals of
the medieval times were seamlessly tied into a campaign. Yes, it was amusing so
maybe it was not as seamless, but that added to the overall presentation. I
really liked how the group took current issues and combined those with the
stances of Beowulf. It really did end up becoming a modern take on Beowulf;
well more so what Beowulf would be like in our time. Ultimately, the group
played on the audienceÕs emotions, giving them what they wanted, while
presenting accurate information on the epic of Beowulf. I could not imagine how
they could have made their presentation better.
I thought that the first round of project
presentations went very well. I was not sure of what to expect and was
very impressed by the quality of the presentations. Although all of the
presentations were very good, the Beowulf 2012 presentation was the one that
was most influential to me. From the very beginning of the presentation,
the group members were able to command the audienceÕs attention and had a sense
of professionalism and preparedness about them. All of the group members
also worked together well when presenting.The presentation was captivating with
the use of a serious tone and PowerPoint presentation that contained many
eye-catching graphics. These aspects, although small, had a big impact on
me. I found them to really engage the audience and communicate a deep
understanding of BeowulfÕs character in the epic. Using Beowulf as a
Presidential candidate was a great idea. I felt that the group did a
great job in presenting and was able to really get their point across and
effectively teach the class about the character of Beowulf, especially with the
use of modern day comparisons. Overall, the Beowulf 2012 presentation is
the one that stood out the most to me and I felt that that group did the best
at communicating their ideas to the class
Though all four groups made the subjects they did
very entertaining, the one that caught my attention the most was Beowulf 2012.
It was amusing how they made a campaign candidate out of the Geet king of
legend, using quotes from the epic as ways of answering the needs of modern
people. Their use of pictures on the slide show were even better at making the
whole thing attention grabbing as well as comical. I found the solution to the
problem of immigration especially funny, and how to deal with the aging baby
boomer generation. It was also very entertaining to hear how they used even
more lines from the epic to answer questions from the 'audience'. To address a
need for more money to stimulate the economy would be to simply ask Beowulf to
bestow some form of gift as 'giver of rings'. If the treasury got too low, he
would simply go and take out some monster to fill it. On the issue of medical
insurance, it was his stand to simply let God decide. The boys would learn to
fight and the girls would learn to cook. On women's rights, his campaign team
stated 'Next question please' which was really funny. It was even more
entertaining when the most cinic of the 'audience' who had questions for the
team was Umfer too! Overall this presentation was obviously well planned out and
designed to be very entertaining for the class. I'm sure it is one of the class
favorites. It sure caught my attention. VOTE BEOWULF 2012!!
Of all the group projects presented on Tuesday, Group
2's production sparked my interest most vividly. As a parody of the currently
tense and somewhat hopeless U.S. presidential primaries, the presentation
targeted the perfect audience - a group of young college students just
beginning to realize the effects of politics on their future lives. I enjoyed
how the elements of Beowulf's presidential platform mirrored key issues in
today's race including the state of our economy, national defense, taxes, and
healthcare. Each issue was accurately presented in accordance with the views
and societal customs depicted in Beowulf, such as the duty of the king to
provide for the financial well-being of his people through his own accumulation
of riches and treasures in lieu of taxation. Beowulf's stance on healthcare
perhaps revealed the greatest contrast between his society and our own.
Healthcare, disregarding the details, is viewed as a necessary piece in our
countries infrastructure on both sides of the political race, however Beowulf
doesn't even recognize the idea. His own answer to the issue is that ÒGod will
decideÓ the fate of your life. This reiterates a common theme throughout Beowulf
of fate, it portrays Beowulf's own view which ironically led to his death, and
it describes the attitude of the entire society during that time. The
presentation itself added another dimension when the actors extended the stage
into the auditorium through a scripted Q&A session with another actor in
the audience. This actor played the role of a reporter or journalist and
propelled the presentation into deeper descriptions of Beowulf's political plan,
which otherwise would have seemed incomplete. Great acting, extremely funny –
well done!
I felt as though group 2 had the most entertaining
presentation. I greatly enjoyed the cleverness of turning Beowulf into the next
presidential candidate. The first speaker provided a solid intro to help gain
the attention of the audience and set the tonality of the presentation. Using
common political debate themes the group was able to cite many examples from
the text that could be twisted into political meaning. These examples coming
from political topics such as economics, foreign policy, taxes, womenÕs rights,
education, healthcare and immigration. The images provided in the
PowerPoint slides helped add laughs to BeowulfÕs political points. When
discussing education the group quoted a few lines from the text saying that
boys should be trained to fight and becomes strong warriors at a young age
which was accompanied by a slide with an image of two children sword fighting.
On the topic of immigration the group presented an image of a family of
immigrants, in which the speaker quoted BeowulfÕs political stance as being
that a person can immigrate if they rally and fight for the nation they
immigrate to. The group then presented the next slide which was the same image
of the family but armed with broad swords. The group also included a bit
containing questions from the audience, a common occurrence in political
debates and rallies. An especially funny point was to provide a ÒlegitimateÓ
birth certificate for Beowulf saying that he was American born and therefore a
legitimate candidate for president. Overall the group provided a fun and
creative way to present the material from Beowulf.
Beowulf 2012, the group presentation on Beowulf, was,
in my opinion, the most meaningful and impressive project presented on Tuesday.
The team did an excellent job of analyzing and breaking down the different
social and character aspects of Beowulf in a creative way. ÒAmericans for
a Geater TomorrowÓ was a humorous campaign slogan for our Òpresidential
candidateÓ: Beowulf. It was refreshing to hear from a group that did not
take themselves to seriously, but it was evident that they knew and understood
the material. Beowulf is super-human in the epic poem, and does not need
any weapons or assistance when battling his foes. The group emphasized
BeowulfÕs power through entertaining explanations of BeowulfÕs view on foreign
policy and education ( training males to fight). The submissive role of
women was also touched on in the presentation when the group exclaimed that
females would be trained to serve and do housework while the males fought.
The piles of treasure that Beowulf receives from his victories in the poem were
even cleverly brought up in the presentation as BeowulfÕs trickle-down
economics. Overall, I believe that this group did the best job of
presenting the reading material in the most creative way.
Every group presented in a unique way: there were
various posters, many quotes, current adaptations or parodies such as the
Bachelorette, and PowerPoints. However, one group's presentation method
definitely stood out to me. Group #2's analogous comparison of Beowulf's
becoming king to our current upcoming election for presidency provided an
insight into the type of person that Beowulf was. The group dissected Beowulf's
reign as king and personality to answer questions and topics that current
politicians would need to answer during debates and along their campaigns.
Examples of these topics include economic policy, education, foreign policy,
taxes, and health care. Beowulf's stance for each of these topics was given in
the presentation. For the economy, Beowulf would obtain wealth from various
quests and the slaying of monsters. For foreign policy, Beowulf would merciless
slay any enemies while helping out any neighboring clans. These two policies
showed that Beowulf was skilled in battle, powerful, and courageous in the fact
that he was willing to face monsters when most would run away. For education,
the males would be taught how to fight, while females would be taught to cook
and clean. As for health care, the young would fight for the old, but the old
peoples' fate would be left up to the Lord. Both of these policies are very
traditional and old as women were thought to only do menial jobs and the men
were thought of as masculine and suppose to fight. By answering current issues
with these traditional policies of Beowulf not only allowed the audience to
relate better and thus understand Beowulf easier, but also provided a sense of
comedy. Much of Beowulf's policies are outdated and would most certainly not be
accepted by society today.
I firmly believe that Group 2 did a substantially
better job with their presentations than any of the other presentations that
day. The group did their presentation on the epic poem Beowulf. What set them
apart from the other Beowulf group was the content of their presentation. They
chose to present the information from the poem as a press conference releasing
the announcement of Beowulf running for presidency in 2012. I found that to be
a very unique and original idea. They maintained their demeanor as a group
which I must say is a difficult thing to do in front of so many people. They
also added plenty of humor into their presentation which added so much to it
considering many may find English Literature to be a very dry subject. There
were multiple times where I found myself actually laughing out loud. They added
the traits of Beowulf and related them to issues presidents would need to face
today. Everyone was able to relate to what they were saying. One thing that
really set them apart from everyone else was the fact that they gave their
whole presentation in the poetic form of Beowulf. A thing they could have
improved on was having the audience be more interactive. They gave the illusion
of doing this by putting one of their group members in the audience who would
speak when it came around to question time. I felt if the group let the
audience be more interactive, their presentation would be that much better. Not
to take away from the rest of presentations, as they all did well, but Group 2
truly stood above the rest.
I found the Beowulf 2012 presentation (presented by
group two) to be not only fresh and inviting but informative and well preformed.
All the group members had obviously spent many hours scripting and practicing
their lines, which was commendable; moreover, the added wit and humor plus the
attention to the detail of the original poem did not go unnoticed. By
describing Beowulf as a presidential candidate, the audience was able to relate
to something they already know about extensively, namely presidential politics,
to the somewhat ambiguous character of Beowulf. Through this process the
audience was presented with Òpresidential candidate BeowulfÕsÓ stance on
various political issues in our present society strongly influenced by the
society and attitude of Beowulf defined in the epic poem. Specifically, issues
such as: taxes, healthcare, foreign policy, inflation, womenÕs rights, and even
abortion were all discussed and the audience was given a clear and concise view
on what BeowulfÕs stance would have been had he been transported in time and
run as a presidential candidate today. I found this presentation to be the most
entertaining for it created a setting or atmosphere, if you will, that I was
familiar and comfortable with while at the same time presenting the required
and essential material with tact and professionalism. I enjoyed it
thoroughly—well done group two.
In looking
at the projects from April 10, although all groups did an admirable job,
personally, group two's presentation stood out most in my memory. I saw this
because that group managed to surprise me with their approach to the source
material using the character of Beowulf as a presidential candidate. I
particularly liked the way the group covered near every facet of Beowulf's
personality into different political platforms, such as: economy, education,
foreign policy, regulation of arms, health care, and others.
The group also managed to weave in elements of the plot and storytelling of the
epic Beowulf in each of their points. The powerpoint presentation was
creative and comical, their usage of pictures throughout was amusing, such as a
blue and red picture of Beowulf with the words "Beowulf 2012"
underneath, reminiscent of Barrack Obama's iconic painting. The script itself
was inspired, paying homage to a standard political rally. The group seemed
more like supporters of a prospective presidential candidate rather than
students delivering a stuffy report on a very old literary epic. This lent an
air of believability to the project as a whole, even if it was openly comical
and satirical. Overall, the presentation was a joy to sit through. Great work!
Of all that groups that presented, I think Group 2
meant the most to me. I thought it was a great idea to look at Beowulf in the
context of our current political environment. It was a good way to see the
difference in what society found important. More interesting is what
similarities we have. People still care about safety and money. It just has a
different name now. It was also a little scary to think that some of our
politicians basically support some of the more radical ideals Beowulf holds.
This group did a good job of pointing out how Beowulf has many of the qualities
we look for in a leader. They cited examples from the book about how Beowulf's
confidence made brought glory to his people. When Beowulf was successful, as he
always was, his people prospered. This was not the case for Beowulf's last
battle with the dragon. The group failed to mention this part, which was probably because they
were trying to promote Beowulf as a viable candidate. As fun as it was to look
at Beowulf as a viable candidate for the 2012 presidential election, I don't
think I could ever vote the values and arrogance of Beowulf.
After seeing all four of the presentations on Tuesday
I think everyone did great but one group stood out the most and that was group
2. I enjoyed the Beowulf 2012 presentation because the provided comedic
inferences to the Beowulf poem and also were able to engage the audience. The
presentation was not only engaging but informative and creative. If I had never
read the Beowulf poem I could have understood the gist after watching group 2Ôs
presentation. Overall it was well planned out and interesting. The clever
references back to the poem allowed them to be funny without loosing the idea
they were trying to convey. I found it particularly funny during the portion of
the presentation on the foreign policy, that was pretty hilarious.I enjoyed the
way the group was able to incorporate all of its members with out making it
feel like one person was controlling the who presentation. Although other
groups tried to do this group 2 did it best. There were many things I enjoyed
about the presentation but my main reason for choosing group 2 is that they hit
all of the key points from the poem that needed to be mentioned where other
groups could have used more clever way of portraying the pivotal scenes. All
this said the group presentations were all great but if it came down to a vote
for the best one I would choose group 2.
Although all of the presentations were well thought
out and creative, Beowulf 2012's presentation was one of the four presentations
that really stuck out to me. Thinking of how an election is coming up in
today's world and having Beowulf as a candidate was extremely original. The
group had clearly practiced together and had each of their roles down to each
line, yet they made it just conversational enough to engage the audience
effectively. They did a great job of balancing enough summary and facts from
Beowulf while tying the presentation to controversies that exist today and
presenting ways that Beowulf would handle them. The powerpoint presentation was
fun and humorous, while still relating to the subject matter. The idea to have
one coup member in the audience to ask questions was a fantastic idea! The
catch phrase, "Americans for a Geater Tomorrow" was also very witty!
I thought the best presentation was group 2 (Beowulf
2012). I liked their presentation because it involved current events and humor.
I liked how they involved the election in their presentation. I think it kept
most people very engaged. It also was a fun way to bring up the qualities of a
leader seen in Beowulf. It also compared how these qualities have changed
between modern day and the middle ages. One of the more prominent differences
is for women's rights and their social role. In modern day women are for the
most part equal to men. This is almost the exact opposite in Beowulf. In that
time women were meant to serve. They had no voice of their own, and even the
queen had little power. They highlighted this in their response to the question
regarding women's rights to which they responded "next question".
Another big difference was the education of children. In beowulf's
warrior society children were taught to fight at a young age. Now in modern
times children are taught mote intellectual things to train them to work in a
professional environment. All the differences were made clear and obvious using
humor. The humor was also an important aspect of the presentation. It keeps
people entertained and interested. It also helps people remember important
points, by creating a link between a memorable joke and an important point of
the presentation. Overall this groupÕs presentation got me interested, kept me
engaged, and left a lasting impression on my understanding of the story of
Beowulf.
The presentation that I found the most entertaining
was group #2. Their group name was Beowulf 2012. I liked their presentation
because I wasn't sure what to expect when they first brought up the powerpoint.
Beowulf 2012 used an appropriate amount of sarcasm that helped to engage
the audience. I also liked that they brought the character of Beowulf into what
he may be like if brought into todays society. The group seemed to be well
informed about Beowulf's character and I liked that they had the person in the
crowd asking questions. This group also used good visuals that kept audience
attention throughout the presentation. I think that each person in the
group did a great job of speaking to the class and making sure that everyone
could hear them. They also had good eye contact and were engaging to watch
present. I thought they did a good job of making sure that each group member
had close to equal amounts of speaking parts in the presentation. Sometimes
when group make presentations there are some people that stand out more than
others or talk significantly more than others. I didn't think that was the case
with this group. I enjoyed the dialog between the person in the crowd asking
questions and the responses from the presenters. I think their idea
of presenting about Beowulf as if he is running for president was very clever
and presented an element of creativity. I know I wouldn't have thought to do
something like this for my presentation. I'm feeling more open to trying
something creative with my group for our presentation, so I'm thankful to have
seen what this group came up with.
Of all the groups that presented on Tuesday, I
thought that group 2 was the most memorable and connectable. The other groups
felt a bit out of touch and dry. Group 2 took a current event, the upcoming
presidential election, and made it ridiculous. Although it wasn't so ridiculous
to the point of where it was unrelated. It was obviously ridiculous that
Beowulf would be running for president this year, on a platform with outdated
ideals that would appall most members of society. The group immediately caught
our attention by talking about something relatable, our opinions towards the
current candidates. Many students here feel like none of the current options
for president are the right choice for our country. They also had a lot of
people (like me) wondering how this was going to connect to Beowulf. After
revealing that Beowulf was running for president, they staged a mock platform
on which he would be running. The entire section was very humorous and kept us
glued to their presentation to hear what they would say next. A questions
segment came next, which turned out to be staged. Overall, I really liked their
presentation, although it wasn't as relevant to Beowulf as the other two
groups' presentations were. It didn't analyze anything, it simply just
extrapolated how Old English societal standards would apply to the political
problems of the present. They did a good job of having their presentation
resonate through humor, but didn't really bring anything new to the table.
After
watching the first four groups present I think they all did a great job! The
group that stuck with me the most and that seemed the most prepared was Group
2: Beowulf 2012. I think they were able to come up with a very unique, creative
idea to present. Their idea was imaginative and unrealistic and yet was able to
focus on a lot of different aspects from the book itself, such as the economy,
taking care of the people, and Beowulf himself. Their idea was not only
creative, but the way they presented it was like a live election with a member
from their group acting as a member of "the audience." All in all I
think they did a wonderful job and I thought it was very fun to listen to and
to watch.
The "Beowulf 2012" presentation was the
most meaningful to me because I liked how it correlated a text written hundreds
of years ago to current times. The group used puns and satire from the text
such as "Americans for Geater America" and discussed key political
issues such as the economy, education, foreign policies, immigration, health
care, and women's rights. It was refreshing to hear about these topics in a
less serious manner, as these topics affect Americans on a daily basis and
cause frustration, uneasiness, and controversy on a national scale. I thought
it was great that the group discussed these issues using direct quotes from the
text to directly answer questions. Each topic had well thought out quotes from
the text to explain and answer the questions, and also pointed out important
themes and important events that occurred in Beowulf. The use of humor
was entertaining, and I thought the group did a great job of keeping a delicate
balance between making the class laugh, yet also keeping their presentation serious
and professional. Using a member of the group to be an audience member
and ask questions made their political debate seem more authentic and added an
extra plus to their presentation. The Powerpoint did the same thing and I
enjoyed the modern pictures that accompanied old-world quotes. The photo
shopped images also added to the humor the group was trying to convey to the
audience. The group seemed very well prepared and used minimal use of
their notes. It was well organized and well presented, and I found their
project to be unique and creative.
The project which was most meaningful to me was
project number two, ÔBeowulf 2012Õ. For its humor and mockery of BeowulfÕs
character, this group presented a spoof of Beowulf in the Election of 2012, as
if he were running in the election to become the next president of the United
States. ÔAmericans for a Geater TomorrowÕ, their slogan started the project in
a humorous state, that led into a discussion of why Beowulf would be the
ultimate ruler of the nation. Their project used a clever tactic in the sense
that without having to state that Beowulf was a prideful and physically strong
character, they instead focused on the mockery of his personal male qualities.
Election 2012: Who should lead us? Beowulf of course. With no other option than
this powerful and strong leader, BeowulfÕs campaign focused on the areas of ÔEconomy,
EducationÕ, The importance of ÔTraining the Youth to FightÕ, ÔForeign PolicyÕ,
and ÔHelp Friend and Kill FoeÕ. The group project focused on underestimation of
the rights of women as well, showing BeowulfÕs narcissistic nature and pride
for male domination and control. The group was creative in delegating a
classmate from the audience to participate and ask questions, which added
further collaborative effort to their project. I chose to reflect on this
project because their light-hearted humor of Beowulf was not only entertaining,
but was informative to the audience of Beowulf himself. I felt the group
project explained BeowulfÕs qualities very well and this project added a sense
of humor to Beowulf as a character himself.
Out of today's presentations, group 2, Beowulf 2012,
was definitely the most enjoyable for me. Not only was their approach
incredibly creative and engaging, but it also perfectly described the character
of Beowulf as well as most aspects of the epic poem. I was really impressed by
the script the group came up with, taking such an old and somewhat archaic text
and applying it to today's political world. That must have taken a lot of time
and effort. Plus, the whole skit was hysterical which is just an added bonus. I
think the reason this particular presentation really struck me was because of
how applicable and relatable it is in this current time. Elections are just 6
months away, so this presentation didn't just make me think about Beowulf, it
also made me think about what I will be looking for in the candidates running
for office. The group thoroughly covered all the different criteria that are
focused on in propaganda pieces, debates, and news reports. While most people
are easily bored hearing the typical answers to politicians' views on abortion,
taxes, arms regulations, immigration, etc., this group added a flare with both
humor and, of course, the very different culture that comes from the text of
Beowulf. It was made clear through this presentation that the group members
understood the text, the themes, the characters, etc., as well as enjoyed the
epic. In the end, I found myself better grasping the text as a whole and actually
enjoying the storyline a bit more.
I felt as though Group 2 gave the best presentation
on Tuesday as their presentation best kept my interest as well as explaining
the epic of Beowulf the best. I thought it was very creative in using a
Presidential campaign model as a way of analyzing and summarizing the epic and
the character of Beowulf. The topics they used to analyze Beowulf worked really
well and I especially liked how,ÓIf Beowulf was made President, he would
require 2 hours of physical education a day in schoolsÓ, which was revealed to
be 2 hours of sword fighting and weapons training. I also thought how the
issues of foreign affairs would be handled Òswiftly and violentlyÓ; by Beowulf
did a good job of describing the character. One of the main topics we talked
about in class was the lack of female representation in the epic and this was
conveyed well in the presentation as the speakers ÔavoidedÕ and dismissed any
questions regarding womenÕsÕ rights. Another idea in the presentation I thought
was especially clever was how the critic and questioner of Beowulf was Unferth,
who was also the critic and questioner of Beowulf in the epic. Overall I feel
as though group 2 did an excellent job, as they also used BeowulfÕs battle with
Grendel as an example of how Beowulf would deal with enemies and what he was
capable of. I also thought it was funny how, intended or not, they were
mocking this yearÕs lack of strong presidential candidates of both the
Democratic and especially Republican parties.
I think all of the groups did a fantastic job on
their presentations today, however I really liked the presentation given by
group #2: Beowulf 2012. Being in the audience I could tell they put a lot of
work into their presentation. The group presented themselves and worked
together very well. The presentation ran very smoothly, they did a good job
getting into their different roles. Their slogan, ÒAmericans for a geater
TomorrowÓ was very clever and a good start to the presentation. It was a very
creative idea to present their information as a political campaign. They
presented a lot of information regarding the book and did it in a very humorous
way. The visualizes were helpful and very funny. There was a lot of laughter
from the audience and it seemed everyone was really enjoying the
presentation.The group did a great job picking out important ideas from the
book and putting a twist on them to incorporate the ideas in to their political
campaign theme. The group presented the information in categories that would be
in actual political campaigns. Such as the argument for education, which
Beowulf would have all children trained to fight instead of other sources of
physical education. Having a group member in the audience was an interesting
tactic but was very beneficial for their project and helped them get their
point across. Being in the audience I was entertained throughout the whole
performance. Overall I think the group did a great job and I really enjoyed
their presentation.
Of all the presentations, I thought Group 2's presentation
was the most meaningful to me because it was tied into the American Economy. I
am very proud of the country I live in and to see classic works of literature
as a part of it made me laugh. Beowulf would be a better presidential
candidate than all of the current candidates. I agree with all of the
points brought up like they're views on education, economics, foreign affairs,
etc. I really like their view on what Beowulf would do regarding taxes
because it is so unrealistic and it would be great to not pay for taxes. Overall,
group 2's presentation was funny, insightful, and just a great presentation.
I enjoyed all of the presentations that were given on
April 10th, but the one that I would like to commend is Group 2. This group did
a very interesting presentation on the story of Beowulf by turning him into a
candidate for president for the upcoming 2012 elections. Personally I thought
this was the most interesting because I like to think that I am as involved in
politics as one could be without running for office. The basic structure of the
presentation was one presenter would ask another presenter about Beowulf's
stance on a number of different policies that are up for much debate here in
the United States. I thought that this was very clever because depending on the
policy question( being foreign policy, economics, abortion etc.), they could
legitimately postulate a valid response based on Beowulf's views and opinions
expressed in the story. Even better still, they said these responses in a prose
that resembled the one present in the story itself. Very well done group 2.
For the first class day of presentations the most
enjoyable presentation to me was the 2nd one titled Beowulf 2012. I
think the group had a very creative way of displaying a piece of the story of
Beowulf that made connections to current events. The presentation was
informational as well as witty.
They started off the presentation discussing current presidential
candidates for the 2012 election and how they didnÕt offer anything of value.
Then they propose Beowulf should be present and used the slogan ÒAmericans for
a Geater Tomorrow!Ó After their initial statement, the group then went on to
explain how Beowulf could solve the problems of America. Economically Beowulf would use a
trickledown economics theory where any extra wealth he has obtained he would
pass down so on and so forth; a theory that would never work in the US but was
most likely how they did things around the time of Beowulf. As for education,
Beowulf would like to see less book work and more physical education, after all
we need to teach our kids how to fight (stressed the group). As a tax you would
have to work for and serve Beowulf. To earn a profit you could kill monsters
and get weapons which are both policies Beowulf is in favor of. As for
healthcare, Beowulf has left it up to God to decide who lives and who doesnÕt. Other policies of BeowulfÕs include no
abortion for they need all the strong warriors they can get and to join entry
in the country you must prove your worth first by fighting. All of these
policies are acceptable in Beowulf time but are not how we currently do things
in the US. It was a funny distinction between what Beowulf would have done and
what our current presidential candidates are trying to do. I enjoyed the
presentation and thought it was well done.
After sitting through all of the group projects that
were presented during Monday's class period, I most enjoyed Group 2 ÒBeowulf
2012Ó. This group's project was extremely creative and enjoyable to watch. They
effectively related Beowulf's qualities to attributes and characteristics of a
presidential candidate. Qualities such as Beowulf's combat skills were
connected to education in the form of physical fitness within the school
system. Two hours per day would be allotted for young boys to focus on
their self defense and fighting skills. Beowulf's stance on woman's rights was
reflected well by portraying women as the Òhome makersÓ and that they serve
their husbands. Beowulf's outstanding faith in the Lord was greatly reflected
in the presentation. The fact that the fate of the people lies in the hands of
God and that he has overall control was a great way of portraying Beowulf's
beliefs. Foreign policy was a very clever aspect of the groups presentation. By
using Grendel, his Mother and the other monstrous battles Beowulf participated
in as examples of foreign policies was a great way to present the information
in an entertaining way. Overall the groups presentation brought many things to
the table performance wise. They projected and clearly delivered their
information. Comedy was weaved throughout their presentation and they
creatively worked all of Beowulf's characteristics into the presentation.
Group 3
The four groups that presented in class today
each used a unique approach in conveying their message about their topic.
Although I definitely thought group two did a wonderful job keeping the
audience intrigued by making the presentation not only informative but comical,
I also thought group three chose a fun way to convey the MillerÕs Tale in the
Canterbury Tales. The idea of turning AlisounÕs three-way love dilemma into a
dating show was hysterical and genius because that was essentially the key
point of the story. The MillerÕs Tale was definitely my favorite reading so far
due to its twisted yet whacky plot and hysterical ending. Group three really
did a fantastic job capturing the essence of each character (Alisoun, Absolon,
Nicholas, and John) with the questions the host asked them in order to win the
love of the ÒbacheloretteÓ, Alisoun. I really enjoyed the fact that [the person
playing] Nicholas responded each question while the audience could see the
reaction (both physically and verbally) of Alisoun, foreshadowing her decision
to choose him in the end like she did in the MillerÕs Tale while the other two
got left in the dust. I personally am not a fan of watching dating shows but
group three made it funny while also indirectly telling a story and the
background of each character.
My favorite group presentation was group threeÕs
interpretation of ChaucerÕs ÒThe Canterbury TalesÓ. I like how they made the
characters participate in a modern game show, the Bachelorette. It was an
interesting way to look at the MillerÕs tale. It really showed how many men
were after AlisonÕs affection. I like how the men were just named as ÒcontestantsÓ
and it was up to you to figure out who was who, which was not too difficult
given their extremely diverse personalities. I also like how John was
eliminated first, because ironically, in the story, that was the man she was
married to. It was interesting to see the whole situation from AlisonÕs
perspective, being a young desirable woman, and how it clearly showed she did
not care that she was married, as shown in the story too. Each man stayed true
to his character in the story, and I think the group did a very good job of
portraying that, through the questions and answers. Also, all the members of
the group did a good job acting as their character. Overall, I thought it was
an intriguing presentation that related well to our age group.
Of the group projects presented yesterday, I think
that Group 3Õs project was the one that was most meaningful to me. I think that
they took the MillerÕs tale about Alisoun and clearly showed how ridiculous she
was and how bad the choices she made were. Before seeing their presentation
yesterday, I felt that she was making a fine choice in the guy that she was
with. Nicholas seemed to be smart, clever, and funny so I figured he was a good
choice. But I feel as though yesterday in the game show, all three of the men
were put into a more modern context making it easier for me to understand their
characters. John came across as a foolish, self-centered guy, which isnÕt much
different from how I felt about him when reading the tale. Nicholas came across
as a conniving player who just wanted to get as many girls as he could, which
is not how I saw him when I was initially reading the tale. And Absolon came
across to me as the guy that is the most respectful and the only one who truly
cared for women. Sure, he is a little on the feminine side, but he was the only
one who seemed to have AlisounÕs best interests in mind. After seeing Group 3Õs
presentation yesterday, I think that if Alisoun felt she had to chose one of
those three men to be with, Absolon would have been the best choice.
Of the four great presentations today, one stood out
above the rest and that was group threeÕs spin on ÒThe BacheloretteÓ. They did
the best job keeping my attention while familiarizing me with material,
specifically the personalities of the 4 characters. I really enjoyed the groupÕs
witty script and their enthusiasm, especially Òthe bacheloretteÓ herself,
Alison, as she acted just as I pictured. The best part of the presentation was
the accuracy of the four charactersÕ scripts and how each of their
personalities matched the characters from the actual Canterbury Tales.
This group also stood out because they were the only group to present on the
Canterbury Tales, which showed me that they were willing to tackle the
difficult reading and make a fun presentation that we could all understand.
They were able to take the actions and words of the Nicholas, John and Absalom
and put them into present-day, comprehensive terms for the whole class to
relate to, which I really enjoyed and found very entertaining. Since I enjoy
watching the real bachelorette on TV, it was fun to see a live parody in class,
especially since it was accurate and relevant to what we are reading and
learning. All of the groups did a great job and all deserve praise for their
hard work in analyzing and interpreting these readings!
ÒThe BacheloretteÓ presentation by Group 4 was the
most meaningful to me because the presentation helped highlight the most
important parts of ChaucerÕs ÒThe Miller.Ó I know that I personally have a
difficult time reading Middle English and find it quite tedious, and I felt
that Group 4Õs presentation helped me to understand the characters from the
story a lot better, which helped me to understand the reading. The group
provided us with a nice summary at the beginning of the presentation before
going into detail about each of the characters. The group did a nice job of
taking the charactersÕ personalities and characteristics and making them into
modern-day people who felt easier to relate to, while still remaining true to
the original story. Group 4 did a great job planning a presentation that was
very easy to understand and still helpful. I liked that they based their presentation
on a show that most of us are familiar with (ÒThe BacheloretteÓ) because it was
easy to understand where they were going with their presentation. They also did
a nice job of making the presentation amusing and interesting to listen to.
Another thing I liked was how they used the PowerPoint, because it was helpful
and added the visual but was not overwhelming or too much. Also, each of the
members of the group did a good job speaking loud enough for everyone to hear.
All the groups had strong presentations, but I
thought that the ÒBacheloretteÓ presentation by Rebecca, Stephanie, Brian, and
Molly of Group #3 was especially meaningful and interesting. I enjoyed
how they interpreted the MillerÕs tale from Geoffrey ChaucerÕs Canterbury Tales
into a recognizable modern format of a dating show. They were able to
accurately portray the characters Alisoun, John, Nicholas, and Absolon as
described in the tale. They successfully shared information about the
characters and plot while adding humor in a way that the class could relate to.
The questions and responses were very clichŽ of typical dating shows,
while revealing a lot of information from the story. In the second
question when the bachelorette asks Òwhat is the craziest thing you have ever
done for a girl?Ó they uncover a great deal about the plot of the story. From
JohnÕs fiasco with the bathtub on the roof, to Nicholas sticking his butt out
the window, and finally AbsolonÕs persistent serrrenade, we are told about the
MillerÕs tale in a comical way. They were also able to interpret the
characters personalities to determine what each of the contestants would look
for in girl, such as NicholasÕ need for fun and risks and AbsolonÕs pursuit of
music. They expressed their characters well through intentional winks and
coughs that indicated events form the story. They did an overall good job
of acting out the parts of the different characters and translating the text
into a modern presentation, which provided helpful insight into the
Middle English text.All of the groups that presented did an excellent job, but
the group that stood out most to me, was group 3. I enjoyed how they made The
Miller's Tale into a modern television show. The group presented it to the
audience in a universal way that everyone in the class could relate to. Most
everyone has seen an episode of the Bachelorette, or at least heard of it. I
found group 3's presentation very entertaining and liked how Alisoun questioned
the three men according to the story.The presentation depicted each character
according to how they were described in the story and made for a delivery that
was easy and fun to follow. I also thought the rose on the presentation was
great imagery because it made me think of romantic love, which is usually
thought of during that period of time, but Alisoun was promiscuous in the story
and the group members excelled at demonstrating that to the audience. I really
enjoyed the presentation!
In my opinion, group number three had a very
effective presentation. I found it interesting how well the popular television
show, The Bachelorette, went along with the story of the Miller's tale from The
Canterbury Tales. Although written hundreds of years ago, the themes written
about are obviously universal if they can be applied to situations in the
present day. I thought the fact that this group was able to bridge the time gap
so well to be impressive. They clearly portrayed the story Chaucer wrote, but
also managed to interpret the characters into modern day personalities. I
believe that being able to translate John, Absolon, and Nicholas into modern
day bachelors while maintaining their characteristics indicates that the group
truly understood and comprehended what they read. Also, they stayed true to the
idea behind the Bachelorette, presenting one woman with multiple suitors.
However, their presentation showed the men all beginning on the same level,
rather than having different histories with Alisoun as the MillerÕs story
explains. One other aspect of their presentation I liked was the fact that the
bachelors were left unnamed until the end of the presentation. This required
the audience to truly be involved and have to think about which bachelor was
which. Although the three men are very different, I liked that the group
structured the presentation so that the audience had to pay at least enough
attention to figure out who each bachelor was. The fact that they chose a
portion of The Canterbury Tales to present on rather than Beowulf like the
other three groups that presented also helped distinguish this particular group
from the others.
I really enjoyed Group 3Õs presentation on the
Chaucer readings. They did a good job keeping my attention and they came up
with a creative approach to present the material. I found it rather humorous that
they chose to do a dating show since AlisonÕs love life directly related to the
idea that these men are trying to win her over. She has the power to chose
which man she wants, however she is very flirtatious and if she could she would
have them all, which they make apparent. They did a good job presenting
details, characteristics, and individualistic personalities of each man in
AlisonÕs life through the answers to Alison questions. I liked how each man
fighting for her love answered the questions differently and accurately
according to the story line. It was easy to guess who was who based on the
responses, which captured the main aspects of who they were. I really like that
they didnÕt just present the class with the differences of each man, but rather
had their differences and their motives shine through with each of their
answers. It was funny and interesting to listen to, which is always a plus.
All of the groups that presented yesterday were
great, though it was group 3 that fascinated me the most. Their comparison of
the millerÕs tale to the bachelorette TV show was spot on. The two share an
uncanny resemblance. It is amazing to think that what Chaucer wrote down as a
drunken millerÕs tale, a story that is preceded by a word of warning, is now
general programming. It also goes to show that the themes for stories havenÕt
changed and society still finds the same ideas entertaining. The bachelorette
plays on the idea of having multiple male interests competing against each
other for the affection of one woman. Although, there isnÕt any literal hot
pokers involved there is plenty of figurative backstabbing. I would also like
to say that the group did a good job portraying the characters in the story,
especially Alisoun. She just was looking for a good time and was unable to be
swayed by financial security. For all that John was able to provide for her, he
took away her freedom and made her feel like a prisoner so both Absolon and
Nicholas could actually give her more than John. When it came time to make the
final choice, the clever wit of Nick beat all the pomp of Absolon. The looks of
Absolon could not overcome his lack of manly characteristics.
While all of the project were so thoughtfully
performed, I loved project number 3. My favorite show is the bachelor and
so I was able to connect with this presentation really. First off, I
thought "The Bachelorette" was a fabulous way to describe the
character of Alisoun. The group says numerous times that she would rather
not be on this show and have all three, however it will help her pick one. Alisoun's
character is depicted very well with the questions that she asks, such as
"What is the craziest thing you have done for a woman?" and
"What kind of date would you take me on?" She wants the man to go
above and beyond for her. As far as the three men go, it was a great way
to depict each of the characters. Contestant #1 is portrayed as this
rich, abiding man who will do anything to make sure his lover is loyal to him
and him only, which clearly portrays the character John. Contestant #2 is
portrayed as this clever, romantic, man who will trick anyone or do anything to
get exactly what he wants, which would be John. Lastly, contestant #3
seems to be an ordinary guy who simply wants that aspect of romance in his
life, but will do out-of-the-ordinary things to get what he want, portraying
the character of Absolon. All together, this presentation clearly
portrayed the character's personalities well in a fun, creative, and relatable
away for probably a lot of girls!
While all four presentations were entertaining, I
found that Group ThreeÕs production provided a refreshingly modern twist to the
telling of The MillerÕs Tale. Combining characters and their personalities from
the original text with the modern reality TV show The Bachelorette, I felt that
Group Three took this time-worn Canterbury Tale and gave it an extra polish
that made the characters come to life. The set up of this presentation had the ÒContestants
# 1, # 2, and # 3Ó (John, Nicholas, and Absolon) answering a series of four
main questions, and one final question. I particularly appreciated this format,
and the types of questions like: Òtell me a little about yourselfÓ and Òwhat is
the craziest thing you have ever done for a girlÓ and Òwhat do you look for in
a girlÓ because these questions allowed the audience to apply their knowledge
from the Tales and guess who each of the contestants were. The responses to
each question were well-written, and corresponded nicely with ChaucerÕs
depiction of the wayward Alisoun, controlling John, devil-may care Nicholas,
and love sick Absolon By adding the dating/ Bachelorette theme into the mix,
Rebecca Miller (Alisoun), Stephanie Pace (John), Brian Spain (Nicholas), and
Molly Cantwell (Absolon) of Group Three left the audience wondering if the
fickle Alisoun would chose Nicholas as her date, or one of the two other
contestants. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed watching Group ThreeÕs presentation,
and loved how they put faces to the characters of ChaucerÕs epic poem.
All of the presentations on April 10, 2012 were
outstanding and very interesting but one group stood out to me the most: ÒThe
BacheloretteÓ. The three contestants did a great job acting in characters of
John, Nicholas, and Absolon. They did a fantastic job with all four scripts by
keeping my attention and corresponding their characters personalities with the
actual Canterbury Tales. I thought each question the Bachelorette asked was
very creative and I thought it was helpful and entertaining the way they put the
lines from a challenging reading into modern terms and relations. Especially
some of the answers to questions toward the end of the presentation were
hilarious. I loved the humor behind this presentation and it was just like the
original ÒBacheloretteÓ on television. It was very well thought out and
definitely set the bar high for the rest of the class. All the presentations
were great and did a remarkable job exploring the readings and presenting them
in an understanding and amusing way. Great Job!
Although all of the groups that presented in class on
Tuesday did a wonderful job, I especially connected with the presentation from
Group 3 (The Bachelorette). It was intriguing to imagine what John,
Nicholas, Absolon, and Alisoun would be like in real life. The group went
through a series of questions that each contestant (John, Absolon, and
Nicholas) answered in turn. In the end, the bachelorette Alisoun chose the
charming Nicholas. I appreciated this presentation because not only was it
engaging, but because it also brought The MillerÕs tale to life with a modern
twist to it. This made it particularly relatable to the audience. The group
used descriptions from the Canterbury tales to make the responses of each of
the three male characters realistic. For example, the
contestant Absolon revealed that he loved to dance and sing and be merry. This
is reflected in the text of the Millers tale: ÒA
myrie child he was, so God me save [É] In twenty manere koude he trippe and
daunce [É] This Absolon, that jolif was and gayÓ (lines 3325, 3328, 3339). The
members of Group 3 additionally made their characters accurate to the MillerÕs
tale with acting. For instance, the girl who played Alisoun acted silly and
young and eccentric and the girl who played John acted old and boring. Overall,
Group 3 did an excellent job and I enjoyed the Bachelorette!
The presentation titled "The Bachelorette"
was definitely my favorite. It may have to do with my strange obsession of the
reality show that they based it on, but I enjoyed it regardless. By asking each
contestant questions about themselves so Alisoun could get a better
understanding of her potential future husbands, the audience was able to get a
better understanding of all of the characters. The audience was not given the
names of the men being interviewed, but we all knew who the three contestants
had to be, and it was our job do decipher their answers to find out who was
playing which male in the Miller's Tale. Alisoun was played very well and was
very confident in her presentation and questions. All three men were fairly
easy to pick out, but were presented well with the facts that they relayed.
Overall, The Bachelorette was a great way to incorporate the tangled love mess
that Alisoun created. I applaud this group for keeping a difficult reading fun
and entertaining.
Group 3's project was interesting. They did a good
job critically extracting common themes from the Miller's tale. Presenting it
in the form of a dating game show was clever as this provided a good vehicle
for communicating details of the story. They used four main points or questions
to give an insight into Nicholas, John, and Absolon: "Tell me about
yourself", "What is the craziest thing you've done for a girl",
"How did the last relationship end", and "What are you looking
for in a girl". Since the bachelorette and bachelors' stories were
actually intertwined in the Miller's Tale, the responses of the bachelors gave
indirect insight into Alisoun's character. Specifically, when the third
question came up, the bachelors' responses revealed Alisoun to be a cheater and
prankster. In the performance, I noticed a little dramatic tension since the
bachelors' tales were personally familiar/similar to the bachelorette's
experience (as though they were talking about her ::wink::). At the end,
Alisoun eliminated her husband from the running (er, I mean the bachelorette
eliminated bachelor #1). Her last question between bachelors #2 and #3 was
about their ideal of a date. I liked the group's creative license to suggest
that Absolon would take her out to karaoke based on his musical background.
I personally enjoyed the presentation by group #3.
Their presentation was "The Bachelorette," which was a skit based on
ChaucerÕs Canterbury Tales. Their skit was interesting because it played
on the theme of the old dating game shows, but also had a modern twist that
included aspects of ABCÕs television show ÒThe Bachelorette.Ó Even though
itÕs a ridiculous show, I am a sucker for it, and thought it was a clever way
to present the different aspects and stories of love from the MillerÕs Tale. All
three men in the tale confess their love to Alisoun in different ways, which is
pretty much what happens on ÒThe Bachelorette,Ó so I thought it was a nice
parallel. I was wondering where the ending of the skit was going to go
because I predicted Alisoun eliminating Absolon first, and then making her
decision between John and Nicholas. I also like that the group used a
powerpoint to assist in the presentation rather than having the powerpoint be
their presentation. The powerpoint also made it easier to follow along
during the skit, and overall, added a good element to it. The script was
clearly written and accurately portrayed the characters of Alisoun, Nicholas,
John and Absolon. The charactersÕ answers to AlisounÕs questions were
written so that we could easily understand the charactersÕ personalities and
make guesses as to which person was playing which character. I was able
to guess all three characters correctly. The portrayal of Alisoun was
also very accurate in showing that she is a promiscuous woman who likes to have
fun, and canÕt really be trusted. In addition to that statement, I
appreciated the group membersÕ, especially ÒAlisounÕs,Ó attempt to really get
into the characters that they played. It made the presentation easier to
pay attention to as well as added some life to it.I really enjoyed the
presentation given by group number 3, The Bachelorette. I was already
interested in hearing their presentation on this topic because in my previous
readings, I greatly enjoyed this particular story involving Alisoun and her
three different men. Also, because I am such a huge fan of the real
bachelorette show, I was immediately interested by their title and willing to
give my full attention to the group members. I thought it was really
creative how they explained the story in a "dating" game situation. Each
of the male characters represented by the team members were easily identifiable
with the detailed information that they gave in response to each question
asked. I enjoyed how animated "Alisoun" was when asking the
specific questions to her contestants. Not only did their presentation
cover the basic facts about each character of the story, it also gave specific
examples that occurred in the actual story line as well. The overall
presentation was very simple and easy to follow. There were also never any dull
moments, they were able to keep my attention during the whole performance. Their
slide show was a very nice visual that not only went along well with the
overall bachelor theme they had, but it also allowed the audience to follow
along with the interviewing process. All of the group members knew their
parts and lines pretty well and together they were able to successfully perform
their act of the "bachelorette." They were able to bring humor
and fun to their presentation as well as clearly explaining the details and
main points of the particular story and it's interesting characters.
Of the three groups that presented on April 10, 2012,
I felt that the third group's performance and interpretation of the Miller's
story was most entertaining. The group modernized the MillerÕs story by
turning it into a sort of dating show in which Alisoun, who in the Canterbury
Tales was the center of a love triangle, was a bachelorette being pursued by
three different males, each modeling themselves after the three men involved
with Alisoun in the MillerÕs tale. I felt that this presentation was
especially helpful as it created a persona for each character through the
questions that the bachelorette asked. I felt that the presentation was
most entertaining and I felt that factor was important as that was the reason
for which the tale was told. The Miller told the story for the enjoyment
of those around him.
I really liked the bachelorette the most because
it conveyed the most information of the 4 groups. It did not just
spit out all the information in a chronological order on a power point with
pretty pictures, the group took a fun and modern concept and incorporated the
story with it. The Bachelorette is a fun and modern story that everyone
can relate to and the group nailed the delivery and I was entertained the
entire time. It was nice to have the story from four different perspectives
while trying to give each character's personality and perspective. This was
the one presentation given that day that I was able to get the jest of
plot of the story without needing to read the story. The group added a
nice twist to the story in that they told the story from the perspective of Alisoun,
and she hasnÕt yet chosen who she wants to be with. It gives a nice
perspective into what was going on inside her mind when she is deciding what
man she wants to be with, and when you look at the story in this way, I donÕt
blame her as much for choosing who she did, but this group does avoid casting
the negative light on her character that Chaucer does. This group did not
give very much information about Alisoun, while Chaucer calls her a promiscuous
slut. Great job group 3.
The group whose presentation struck me most as unique
and meaningful would have to be Group 3Õs. I feel that their take on spinning
ChaucerÕs tale into a dating show was quite comical and helped keep me
interested. The comedy involved in their skit greatly mirrors that of ChaucerÕs
style as well making it most original.What I thought was very interesting was
how they kept the characters in the dating show anonymous. So that as the
script progressed, the audience would stay focused on what was going on and
piece together as to which character was which. For instance, when Alisoun
asked Contestant #1 to tell her a little more about himself, his response was, ÒI
was richÉÓ I like how Group 3 had tailored their game show answers in being
transparent to audience members that have read the story. Already, the word ÒrichÓ
was a dead giveaway for the character, John.Additionally, the funniest part of
their presentation I felt was Group 3Õs clever use of puns. For instance, when
Alisoun asked Contestant #3 how his last relationship ended, and Contestant #3Õs
response was, ÒÉour relationship ended because I was tired of kissing her assÓ.
All in all, I thought it was really neat and original how the contestantÕs
answers were summaries of what had actually happened in the story, but spun in
a comical way. This starkly added my interest in their presentation because
rather than being a long and boring regurgitation of the story, they had spiced
it up mirroring a modern day game show.
Group 4
I thought the presentation given by group four
comparing the Beowulf epic to the movies adaptations was informative as well as
interesting. I was unaware that there were more than one movie version and have
not seen any of them myself. However, I have always been interested in
the way stories transfer to the big screen and appreciate when it is done we
and holds true to the story. I believe that group four put quite a bit of
effort into their presentation and brought up some good points for examination.
They talked about things that may not have been so obvious such as the
change in Hothgar's character and the historical accuracy of the costumes
and scenery. I thought it was very interesting that not a single movie
held true to the actual story. Beowulf is an extremely action packed and
eventful story that does not need much exaggeration to be
entertaining. There are a large number of fight scenes that could be made
extremely exciting with today's special effects. I think the group
brought an interesting point that the changes in adding a romantic plot may
have been done to modernize the epic. I think it is unfortunate that
directors today feel that romance is necessary to make a movie popular and
enjoyable. The focus of Beowulf is heroism, bravery, and battleThe addition
of a love story, especially if it is made to be a central theme, can only
detract from that.
As much as I appreciated all of the presentations, I
really liked Group 4's powerpoint comparing and contrasting the epic of Beowulf
and the movie Beowulf vs. Grendel! I've never seen any of the Beowulf movies so
it was a really interesting idea to demonstrate all of the similarities and
differences and how the storyline of the epic was changed or added to. Their
presentation was very cohesive, well organized, and had really great
information in it. I especially liked how the group members pointed out that
the love triangle between the added character of the witch, Beowulf and Grendel
was unnecessary in the movie version. Very well thought out presentation!
The final group that presented gave insight into
various adaptations of Beowulf including Grendel the movie, the original Epic
poem, and two more recent movies that have been made. Having seen the newest
Beowulf movie, and read the Epic a number of times, I found this analysis
particularly interesting. With the rising number of books that are being
adapted into movies, it is often useful to weigh the pros and cons of such
adaptations and debate whether the movie does the book justice. Most
often, the answer is no. It is often difficult to hold true to a story or poem
of considerable depth and description strictly due to time constraints. At the
same time, it is important to realize that movies are not books, and the
director ought to be given a significant amount of creative freedom. Adapting
the vast, epic descriptions written in Beowulf, to a two hour movie is no
simple feat, and given the restraints, I believe the directors of the newest
movie did a fine job.
For this project day, I was torn between the second
group and the fourth group. I liked them both for very different reasons. I
liked Group 2 and their presentation of the candidate Beowulf for the 2012
election. This was very creative on their part. They spoke using the language
and pattern of the Beowulf text, while applying it to a modern event. I liked
the use of their modern slide depictions for issues of concern relevant to
today's voters. All of the group members participated equally and they had good
interaction with the audience. The audience seemed very interested and laughed
throughout the presentation. The reason I liked this presentation was because
they seemed well prepared and practiced. I also thoroughly enjoyed their humor
because they managed to make light of the strenuous task of picking a candidate
for election. On a completely different take was Group 4 with their comparison
of the Beowulf epic versus the movie. I have never seen the movie, so it was
very nice to hear that I was not missing a very accurate retelling of the
story. All of the group members explained a different aspect and taught the
audience a lot about the differences. I am I was happy that they said the movie
was historically accurate and that most characters were accurately portrayed.
However, it is really disappointing to hear that there are no good movie
depictions of such a good epic! While both of these groups were very different,
I thought they both did an excellent job for a creative project.
Although all the presentation were very creative and
fun, I most related to the fourth. I was immediately intrigued when they
started talking about the plot of the first Beowulf movie. Just like in most
movies that take after a novel or story, it became clear right away that the
movie was quite unlike the epic. But it can be fun when everyone has there own
ideas and takes on a story; although it sounded like the movie really deviated
from the original story line. I really liked that they pointed out some of the
pros of the movie, like the visual effects of Europe and the swordsmanship of
Beowulf. I am interested in watching the first portrayal of the movie with
Gerard Butler and the most recent film. The futuristic Beowulf film didn't seem
that appealing to me. They did a fair assessment in pointing out the pros and
cons of the Epic Poem itself, most of them I agreed with completely. I am quite
a movie fan, and would hope that someone can come up with a movie that is more
like the storyline of the poem but still adding their own creative flare.
Overall, I enjoyed the presentations and have a better understanding of what
kinds of ideas I may be able to come up with for my own presentation.
Personally, I felt that group four was most
successful in depicting what an Epic like Beowulf entails, and contrasted that
to modern day storytelling and movie making. I am a major
cinephile, and I have seen all of the movies they mentioned besides the Beowulf
set in the future. Their tactic of explaining the movie Beowulf Vs.
Grendel was very effective. They described the important scenes, events
and how it was similar or different to the Epic we read in class. At
times, they defined the epic by saying what it was not; for example, they
brought up a lot of things that were in the modern movies that were not in the
Epic, which reflects our culture, and how it has changed since then. I
agree completely with their take on Beowulf Vs. Grendel. The scenery was
extremely beautiful and the weapons, armor, ships, and architecture were
represented accurately. However, I did not like the fact that Grendel was
very human. The plot changes, such as the near mourning of Grendel's
death, showed that they took the Epic of Beowulf with a good amount of liberty.
As the group said, I do not like this twist in the story, it seems so
unlike Beowulf and the Nordic culture they were a central part to. Another
difference in the way we tell our stories is that for us, there are often
twists and surprises. As Michael said, the Epic of Beowulf is fairly
devoid of surprise. The reader knows he will defeat Grendel and triumph
over his mother, and know that he will ultimately be defeated by the dragon. All
in all, Group #4 was entertaining and my favorite. I enjoyed listening to
them. The only thing I would have liked to see added to their
presentation was possibly a video clip of the movies, instead of just a
screenshot here and there. That would really have driven home their
point.
The student project that was most meaningful to me
was Group 4Õs presentation of Beowulf the movie versus Beowulf the epic. While movies
are fun to watch, the interpretations that they draw from the books or written
works they are based off of never fully capture the story told in the books or
written works. I have not seen the movie (Beowulf and Grendel) that they
presented their project on, but I have seen the more recent computer animated
adaptation of the epic. Like they said with Beowulf and Grendel, in Beowulf,
Hrothgar was betrayed as weak, and there was also an unnecessary love story
between Beowulf and HrothgarÕs wife. No matter how much a movie tries to
display everything there is in a book, writers, the vast majority of the time,
use their words to paint a much clearer picture and insight into the characters
than those who make the movie can through actors and screenplay. I also thought
it was interesting that the group brought up cons not only of the movie, but of
the epic as well. One of the cons, which I disagreed with, was that Beowulf was
Òtoo super-human.Ó I think that was part of the point of the book, in that
Beowulf was a larger than life super-human that could do things normal people
couldnÕt. The fact that there are monsters, dragons, and other fictional things
in the epic displays that the author was not trying to make this something that
could believably happen in real life. However, I do agree with them on the rest
of their objections, in that I wish it had been longer too, and elaborated on
his reign while there was prosperity. This group did a great job presenting the
material and coming up with an interesting comparison to the epic.